G GotchiGirl96 Well-known member Joined Sep 10, 2006 Messages 9,440 Reaction score 19 Location New York; United States Apr 22, 2007 #21 No need to be sorry. [For future poems] what didn't you like about it? Was it weak in areas, poor word choice or just something that didn't catch your likings? As long as I get the meaning out I'm happy. Click to expand... Like, your word choice was a little shaky. And some spots just didn't make sense to me and were a bit weak.
No need to be sorry. [For future poems] what didn't you like about it? Was it weak in areas, poor word choice or just something that didn't catch your likings? As long as I get the meaning out I'm happy. Click to expand... Like, your word choice was a little shaky. And some spots just didn't make sense to me and were a bit weak.
T tamaw/pants Well-known member Joined Sep 28, 2005 Messages 6,318 Reaction score 1 Apr 22, 2007 #22 Like, your word choice was a little shaky. And some spots just didn't make sense to me and were a bit weak. Click to expand... Ok, I'll keep that in mind. ;] Thank you.
Like, your word choice was a little shaky. And some spots just didn't make sense to me and were a bit weak. Click to expand... Ok, I'll keep that in mind. ;] Thank you.
