My Poem- have a read?

[GotchiGirl96]

No need to be sorry.
[For future poems] what didn't you like about it? Was it weak in areas, poor word choice or just something that didn't catch your likings?

As long as I get the meaning out I'm happy.

Like, your word choice was a little shaky. And some spots just didn't make sense to me and were a bit weak.

 

[tamaw/pants]

Like, your word choice was a little shaky. And some spots just didn't make sense to me and were a bit weak.

Ok, I'll keep that in mind. ;]

Thank you.