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I just don't see how a doctor can overlook those things.

Jade said, "I only wish I knew how." She buried her face in his chest with a muffled sigh. "I feel like an idiot right now."

 
If I ever became a doctor, I would try to be kind, and care about everyone.

Jade asked him, "Do you think I'm a bad person?"

 
I would never be a doctor.

Now, I could do research for medical purposes, but thats a different field entirely.

"I would never think you are a bad person." He said, simply. "I already know that you are a great person. I can tell, too. I can smell, even taste a persons aura, and I know how they feel and what their personas dictate."

He giggled slightly, but it sounded more like a hoarse laugh. Not much sound came out of Avar at this time."

 
I don't want to be a doctor.

I'm a big wimp.

Jade sighed, slightly reassured. "That makes me feel better. Thank you." Although, of course, she did have her doubts about herself.

 
Ive taken two med classes, two vet classes, several life-science/bio classes, and a marine biology class.

I am not afraid of blood, guts, organs, or otherwise in the slightest xDD

in fact, I draw skeletons and organ systems really well, and I often drew them in red pen, so it kind of scared people (I wouldnt label the papers as my med/vet/bio/ect class papers) and I actually got reported to guidance twice.

"I am only a bird deep down, after all." He laughed. "And us animals have refined instincts."

"Sure." He whispered slightly. "Im feeling better."

 
Dissecting a pig nearly made me vomit. I'm squeamish.

I wish I wasn't afraid.

Jade said, "I wish my instincts were like that. But I always manage to get into trouble." She kissed him, then added, "And you always manage to get me out of it."

 
why did you get sent to guidance?

if just drawing that got you sent there...

my friend Terra would be like, in a crazy home

"Good." Willard smiled.

 
Sometimes I drew the organs as they would be falling out of the animals body, and they thought I was disturbed.

I would be in a crazy home anyways xDD

In other news, I got bored and took the Mary Sue lit tests for some of the characters on the roleplays.

Dani as a MW character got a -10 (Which is awesome, the lower the score the better your character) but as a normal person in my stories got a 9 (Which is still really good)

Catalin also got a 9

Avar got a 13, causes hes been raped and abused physically/emotionally/sexually and also because Willard is 'a kind loving person nursing him back to health' xDD

Fayge in Worlds End got a 26 ;.; But she was only Borderline Sue.

Axie always gets a lot of points marked off for having my name xDD

"My insticts are often clouded." He murmured. "I shifted out of my avian form long before my sister, so much so that I can no longer go back to what I was, and my animalistic side is buried deep. But with people, I can somehow sense."

He smiled slightly, taking Willards hand.

 
WOW AXIE!

you're a winner, for sure. <3

Jade said, "My instincts are basically always wrong anyway. I think I know what to do, and when I do it, someone ends up hurt, or angry. I think I know people, and they turn out completely different. So far, the only thing I've gotten right is you."

 
your so lazy xDD

I have a feeling Willard will score awfully on it xDD

Thank BG! You really think my characters fair that well?

Maybe I should do it for Croy and Tettra, but Im afraid to cause their deities. Even though I feel like their well rounded, at least Croy.

"Well, they certainly are bad if you still think im amazing." He teased. "Seeing as I was the deity representing suffering, grief, outcast, taint and heresy."

"Can I sleep now?" He kidded, but he sounded serious.

 
I started to take the mary sue quiz... but it was soooooooo long......

besides, I think all of my characters are mary sues, in one way or the other. xD

Jade said, "Hey, I have my own take on what's amazing and what isn't." She playfully punched his arm.

 
You guys are awful xDD

I think I know enough about Willard to take it for you, Jinxy. Should I?

He laughed, pulled her under his arm, into a headlock, and messing with her hair. "Oh yha?"

"Booo." He whispered. "So when?"

 
I know. I take pride in my awful-ness.

"Yeah!" She exclaimed, trying to writhe her way free. She reached up and tried to mess with his hair, abandoning hope of breaking free.

 
To late xDD

Just from what I know about Willard (Excluding all of the personals, like "Same taste in music/food/hobbies/quirks and religion, also the last section.)

He scored 46- That makes him

36-55 points: Mary-Sue. Your character needs some work in order to be believable. But despair not; you should still be able to salvage her with a little effort. Don't give up.
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xDD Well, its not as bad as it could be.

He blushed a little bit, as if he had recently become shy of Willards affection.

Croys white, whispy hair was just in reach of her, but he seemed to enjoy the petting more then she was enjoying her noogie.

 
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