Heh. Rate this drawing of Temari

[RachelGotchi]

Unless you can literally PROVE you are a Talented manga artist I am going to say you are full of it and cant draw for Jack. Sorry for going there but its true, and in the manga that is how Temari looks <.<
Thanks everyone for your Support. I am trying my best, I already entered the Nicktoons network "Show your Show" Contest (About a 13 year old girl, normal and stuff. She had a evil spirit trapped in her. Some people try to kill her but when she is free she plays pranks, has fun, and hangs out like a normal teen. Thats a quick summary) And Im hoping to win, the Character was completely original in Designs so Im hoping to win. If you all like my drawings I might have a chance at Character design

PM me the link to the competition, I may want to enter.

As for the drawing, I see improvement in your art! Although I think the body is oddly shaped and something else I can't put my finger on, I still think it's a good picture.

Put in some more detail where it's needed next time.

6/10