YellowJedi
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(Could he have the power of persuasion, or is that too powerful/stuish?)
(Aqua, your form didn't really change much from the form I rejected the first time. Why did your character let fear rule her life? Fear of what exactly? Judging from her wish, I'm guessing she fears people tricking her and using her, but if that's the case, why is so so talkative and confident, even after her wish? BTW, your power sorta doesn't work in this RP, and this isn't like Lucario or anything who can see if someone is a good person or not by their aura, this is the real world... So the power kinda doesn't work in terms of seeing through peoples souls and auras and stuff. But it is okay in terms of seeing through illusions and disguises and stuff.)Runner...........? What about my form?
(I guess it would be okay, just don't overuse it or anything)(Could he have the power of persuasion, or is that too powerful/stuish?)
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