-EbilKitteh-
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Decided you didn't like it because you thought it was stupid or just to much work?
So post some of it here.. Sort of like a game~
My attempted Digimon fan fic..
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My breath made a small puff of something. It was sort of like a cloud, but you know... Gah! But I'm not very good knowing those kinds of words. Sorry, I'll introduce myself. I'm Lora; 14 and in 8th grade! I have puffy chocolate hair. Well, it isn't chocolate colored anymore. I dyed it rose. I thought it was really cute and stuff, but --- Wait, I'm going really off topic, aren't I? Maybe you just want to know about what I was describing earlier.
Well, uh...
Oh yes! My friend Else was making me go to some concert. She said it was my early Christmas present to her.
The park was foggy, and the thick layer of snow covering the path was grey with the passing of many boots over it. The sound of laughter was almost inaudible in some parts, but was booming in others. "Hey, LOORRRR-AAAAHH!" called out a strawberry blonde with light eyes and skin. Her pink jacket hugged her body, like her wet hair hugged her face. Little snowflakes fell softly onto her head, but melted almost as soon as they touched their target. The name was repeated again, more softly and less pronounciated. A different girl who was bundled up tight a yellow and green jacket, wearing thick snug track pants slowly walked over to the person calling. Her hair was stuffed in a sort of shower cap style of beanie, which was a size to large. The neon pink of the 'cap' clashed with the vivid colors of her outfit. A small giggled came from the light haired girl. "Lora..." the girl wearing the pink jacket forced out, trying to hide her amusement. "What?" groaned the other girl, apparently called Lora.
--- This is were I decided it was crap >v< In the middle of the 3rd person flash back. ---
(Or should this be in Stuff We Write or Fanfiction? I don't know Because mine is Fanfiction but (IF other people post here) theirs might not be.)
So post some of it here.. Sort of like a game~
My attempted Digimon fan fic..
-
My breath made a small puff of something. It was sort of like a cloud, but you know... Gah! But I'm not very good knowing those kinds of words. Sorry, I'll introduce myself. I'm Lora; 14 and in 8th grade! I have puffy chocolate hair. Well, it isn't chocolate colored anymore. I dyed it rose. I thought it was really cute and stuff, but --- Wait, I'm going really off topic, aren't I? Maybe you just want to know about what I was describing earlier.
Well, uh...
Oh yes! My friend Else was making me go to some concert. She said it was my early Christmas present to her.
The park was foggy, and the thick layer of snow covering the path was grey with the passing of many boots over it. The sound of laughter was almost inaudible in some parts, but was booming in others. "Hey, LOORRRR-AAAAHH!" called out a strawberry blonde with light eyes and skin. Her pink jacket hugged her body, like her wet hair hugged her face. Little snowflakes fell softly onto her head, but melted almost as soon as they touched their target. The name was repeated again, more softly and less pronounciated. A different girl who was bundled up tight a yellow and green jacket, wearing thick snug track pants slowly walked over to the person calling. Her hair was stuffed in a sort of shower cap style of beanie, which was a size to large. The neon pink of the 'cap' clashed with the vivid colors of her outfit. A small giggled came from the light haired girl. "Lora..." the girl wearing the pink jacket forced out, trying to hide her amusement. "What?" groaned the other girl, apparently called Lora.
--- This is were I decided it was crap >v< In the middle of the 3rd person flash back. ---
(Or should this be in Stuff We Write or Fanfiction? I don't know Because mine is Fanfiction but (IF other people post here) theirs might not be.)
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