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Decided you didn't like it because you thought it was stupid or just to much work?

So post some of it here.. Sort of like a game~

My attempted Digimon fan fic..

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My breath made a small puff of something. It was sort of like a cloud, but you know... Gah! But I'm not very good knowing those kinds of words. Sorry, I'll introduce myself. I'm Lora; 14 and in 8th grade! I have puffy chocolate hair. Well, it isn't chocolate colored anymore. I dyed it rose. I thought it was really cute and stuff, but --- Wait, I'm going really off topic, aren't I? Maybe you just want to know about what I was describing earlier.

Well, uh...

Oh yes! My friend Else was making me go to some concert. She said it was my early Christmas present to her.

The park was foggy, and the thick layer of snow covering the path was grey with the passing of many boots over it. The sound of laughter was almost inaudible in some parts, but was booming in others. "Hey, LOORRRR-AAAAHH!" called out a strawberry blonde with light eyes and skin. Her pink jacket hugged her body, like her wet hair hugged her face. Little snowflakes fell softly onto her head, but melted almost as soon as they touched their target. The name was repeated again, more softly and less pronounciated. A different girl who was bundled up tight a yellow and green jacket, wearing thick snug track pants slowly walked over to the person calling. Her hair was stuffed in a sort of shower cap style of beanie, which was a size to large. The neon pink of the 'cap' clashed with the vivid colors of her outfit. A small giggled came from the light haired girl. "Lora..." the girl wearing the pink jacket forced out, trying to hide her amusement. "What?" groaned the other girl, apparently called Lora.

--- This is were I decided it was crap >v< In the middle of the 3rd person flash back. ---

(Or should this be in Stuff We Write or Fanfiction? I don't know o_O Because mine is Fanfiction but (IF other people post here) theirs might not be.)

 
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Invisible Princess in somewhere on my Laptop.

Summer nights, this one had no breeze. The stars shined like gold.

I was a Princess, and I was locked away from the world.

Not the fairy-tale way, I am invisible.

 
I once wrote this story about a fox and her cohorts. She was a spy.

My mom deleted it from her laptop--it was that boring.

 
Invisible Princess in somewhere on my Laptop.

Summer nights, this one had no breeze. The stars shined like gold.

I was a Princess, and I was locked away from the world.

Not the fairy-tale way, I am invisible.
That's pretty good compared to what I can do XP

I once wrote this story about a fox and her cohorts. She was a spy.

My mom deleted it from her laptop--it was that boring.
That made me think of Fantastic Mr Fox... I did that to my brother once. He had a text filed named "SPAM". Well, SPAM is meant to be deleted <<< Got yelled at

 
Mine was about a winged wolf that got locked up by a witch who wanted to slaughter(did I spell it right??) her for her fur and wing silk. Never finished it :p

 
ha ha i wrote a story when i was 8 years old about talking dogs with superpowers...WTC! :p

 
I tried to write a murder mystery once. Never finished it. I lost motivation to write it. I still have the planning near my computer, just never felt like working on the stupid thing.

 
Just remembered another.

It was about a Griffin who had to do several life-changing tasks, but for what reason?

"He needed a stick of bamboo,"

Yeah, great storyline, 7-year-old me.

 
Wrote a really stupid story when I was like...nine or ten?

I can't find it now but I found it yesterday, ripped the pages out of the notebook in sheer embarrassment.

It was about triplets who have magic powers (dumb cliche) and goes to a magic school.

I am very ashamed, but funny when I thought this would be a bestseller three years ago! XD

 
I have a few fan-fiction stories I've tried to right. Then I'd come back every once in a while to still be stuck where I was when I stopped. But I thought they were good though. I just lost where I was going with some.

 
A warriors fan fic was a fail, and I'm sad about it...

Then I also had this idea for a story about this girl who gets caught in the Egyptian Protests of 2011, but I was unable to finish and forgot to, so I dunno about that one..

 
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