i TOTALLY disagree!!!! first of all, it's not against the law to change something,; second, i like her new vampire, because the whole "garlic wards off vampires and they sleep in coffins" is just plain OLD!!!!!!(SPACE HERE PLZ)third, if she would've used the original vampire, the whole story plot would have been ruined. fourth,(SPACE HERE PLZ)the saying " liquid topaz eyes" is not corny, it's just new, what would've been corny is if she would've always been saying "i like your eyes, you have beautiful eyes"(PERIOD HERE PLZ) fifth, you didnt ACTULLY have to make a list!!! we already know all of that crap, so making a list was absolutey pointless, plus, you make a worldwide bestseller sound like a piece of crap that no(SPACE HERE PLZ)one would wanna read, and sixth, if you dont like it, just say you dont like it, you dont have to rant, cause if you do, your going to get some pretty bad responses!!!!!
The worldwide seller was a piece of crap.
This, coming from an amateur writer.
Zip/Dictionary, she is right on it. The character creation in this story was the worst I have seen in a best seller in a terribly long time. I mean, honestly; Six, seven guys liked Bella
as soon as she moved there, like she was a goddess.
I have never know anyone in my life, in schools I have moved to or people who have moved to my schools, who had that attention (Despite the fact it was a small school).
A good portion of The Cullen Clan have the equivalent to Vampire Superpowers (Reading minds, Super-Enhanced beauty, Ability to see the future, ect.) that allows them to prevail in most, if not all, situations; on the opposing team, everyone is a ten foot tall werewolf, despite a legend that
specifically says that the Sons would be Werewolves, and last I checked, Leah is not a male. Also stated is the fact that Imprinting is rare, yet, a good portion of the Werewolves have experienced it as well.
Meyers contradicts herself, even.
As for the Garlic/sunlight ordeal, there are reasons for this. Vampire blood is altered blood, different then our own, which means it has different reactions to different things. Garlic, it affects our blood positively, and is super healthy for us. Opposite goes for Vampires.
As for the sun, holy water and sunlight, the sun is even harsh on us. Now, take us in a sickened form, like Rabies- Rabid animals and humans alike avoid all contact possible with sunlight and water- and multiply it a few times. You then have the sensitivity of Vampire Skin.
I really discredit this series to anyone who has not read it yet; pick up something intelligent, like something by Anne Rice, who writes about the real deal.
By the way, I really messed with your post. You might want to burn it or douse it in holy water before you type anything else; the least you can do is take a lesson from what I added in there.
Hint hint wink wink,
Bold is spelling/grammar errors,
Italics is things I disagree with
Cross-out is a sight I put in there to say, "Take this out now, for the love of God."
Liquid Topaz Eyes made it onto my list of some of the worst physical descriptions ever, along with the word six-pack.