The Secret Life Of A Makiko

[TamaAngelOfTheStars]

Marie told her story to Rinu and Rinu's heart went out for Marie and said"Marie....i'll find you're children for you"Rinu said outside......the kuromametchi realized he was tricked so he ran back to find Marie the children saw their evil father and panicked

 

[ilovekuchipa555]

The children screamed like crazy.

 

[TamaAngelOfTheStars]

Their evil father saw them and grabbed one of them he asked "Where is you're mother!!"Kuromametchi asked the children didn't know

and at the same time,Marie was out for a walk!The children thought"Oh no...''Marie saw what happned and was afraid,she didn't know what to do she just ran away,her evil husband chased her and Marie ran into Rinu's house

Rinu stopped and saw what happened she locked the doors and windows....What will happen next?

 

[CheetahLoverGirl456]

The children stayed where they were, but a little later they ran off. Kuromametchi had been knocked out by slamming his head on the door.

 

[TamaAngelOfTheStars]

Marie's heart was too soft she felt sorry for Kuromametchi so she asked Rinu and Rick to help carry him the bedroom.The two was surprised but,they agreed,when kuromametchi woke up ,he was surprised to find himself in the house he saw Marie and he jumped up and tried to get her but Rinu defended her and said"Hey!BACK OFF!marie did so much for you why do you still want to torment her!?"

 

[Selia]

Kuromametchi said "But Its not my fault! My evil father forced me to do this or else he would kill me! I just wanted to live!" and then he started to cry. "I'm sorry I even listened to that evil father of mine. The truth is I'm secretly in love with Marie! Even if my dad will kill me, I don't care! I would die for Marie, not live!" he continued. "I understand..." said Rinu and Rick. But Marie wanted to give him one last chance. So she said "I forgive you." and hugged him.

 

[TamaAngelOfTheStars]

just then the children peeked in the room and was shocked to she wha happened and rushed in "Mother!!Mother!!"They cried in fear "What are you doing mother!"gabrella asked

 

[Selia]

Rinu said "Excuse me." and walked out with the children. "We are having a private conversation. Please wait outside for a while." she said. So the children just waited. Meanwhile in the bedroom...

 

[TamaAngelOfTheStars]

there was a knock at the door and it was Kuroametchi's dad!!they didn't know and let him in "Have you abused her yet?!?Answer me!Or i'll kill you!"His dad said

 

[Snowfang]

The Kuromametchi stubbornly did not answer. "There is no way you can make me say anything about that subject," he said courageously. His father got a gun and shot his son and he was weak, but still alive. He explained to his children and Marie that in the past, he had been abused as a young child and witnessed his mother's murder by his own father, and threatened him the same way he did recently.

He had run away, hoping to find refuge, but his father had tracked him down and had threatened him that if he did not abuse an innocent Makkio named Marie, he would get rid of him the same way he did to his mother. He did not want any living wittiness to find out about the innocent mother and housekeeper's apparent murder, yet, he lets his son live because as long as he is fearful, he could not tell the police.

That was when it hit Marie. A few years ago, she read in the news that a housewife was apparently murdered in her own house and her husband said that a couple of strange figures had attacked her that night, and that he tried to stop them, but when he came, it was too late. She knew that if she had read it in the news, the Kuromametchi was not lying. The Kuromametchi lay shivering, strugguling to survive his mad father's attack.

(Sorry if this sounds too much...)

 

[boneenie]

Ok so while the Kuromametchi lay shivering, strugguling to survive his mad father's attack. he started to think about wat he could do to make him stop. he saw this item and wanted to grab it and do something to his father and if he did hurt his farther or even kill him then that would be huge for him like it would be something powerful for im but he dosent want to kill his farther yet he just wants to injure him.

so the 5 kids were all scraed about wat was going on and they went to run and hide but they could not get away because they are scared about the storys and that the farther shot the son and......

 

[boneenie]

but she just read the paper again and then she went to her friend and apologized and the she was really srry

 

[Snowfang]

The Kuromametchi soon fell into unconciousness. The father, beliveing his son was dead, gave a snort of triumph and left. Befor he left, he took a menancing glare at Marie and her children. Whatever the Kuromametchi's dad was thinking, it wasn't a good thing. The children were quickly intiminated by his glare.

 

[Shimashimatchi]

Marie's nice sister Rosalina the came to her and said "There... was... this... freak... who... punched... my stomach..." Rosalina fainted, still alive.

Kuromametchi (we should really give him a name. Just call him Sam) told his story when she awakened.

"So that is what happened?" Rosalina said.

 

[Snowfang]

Sam replied, "Yes. And that's what happened." Rosalina said, "Well, you must be really- say, Sam, where are you going?" Sam slanted his ears, turned his head a little and stammered, "This is a revenge-for-a-son-because-his-father-is-a-huge-jerk kind of job." Marie said, "If Sam's going, I'm going." That was when Rinu and Rick burst into the room again. Being a Violetchi, she had many herbs in her garden, so she sent Rick to get some healing herbs. Sam asked why she bothered Rick to get the herbs instead of going for a box of Band-Aids. Rinu said it was more natual and more soothing than a box of Band-Aids. For one, Sam had to agree. They soon pached him up and calmed down Rosalina's "wind taken out of her". Rosalina agreed to come along with her sister, Sam, and the children. He said after his father murdered someone, he would retreat going to Coldsilver Town. So, when Marie, Sam, Rosalina, and the children arrived back at Coldsilver Town, they saw...

 

[Medicham12]

A couple pf gangs blocking the way to a hotel building. Sam asked what were they doing.

"None your buisness." sneered a Mametchi.

"Get way from here." A Tarakotchi added.

When the family didn't move, the gang members threatened to have Marie taken inside the building.

They still didn't move so some gangsters took Marie inside by force.

 

[Shimashimatchi]

The Tarakotchi (Tommy) was actually nice and when everyone (exept the gang) left, Tommy beat up all the gang people. Tommy tagged along with Marie and friends, saying "You can go. I beat up all the bad people."

So they passed the place where the gang was.

 

[Shimashimatchi]

"Wait! Marie is gone!" Rosalina :kusatchi: said.

They went in, and found out Sam's dad was there, trying to kill Marie!

"You stop that now!" Rosalina, Sam, and Tommy said.

"Oh look who came. The little girl who cried when I hit her, my son, and...

MY PARTNER THOMAS!?!?" Sam's dad said.

"Yeah, and all that "get stronger" and "beat me up" was just you trying to make me evil!" Tommy said. "I AM NOT FALLING FOR YOUR EVIL PLANS DEATH (that is Sam's father's name)!!"Tommy screamed (note that I said screamed.)

"DID YOU JUST SCREAM AT ME?" Death yelled.

They got in to a battle. "Together, with Rosalina, and Sam, we can't let Marie down!" Tommy thought.

They all took down Death, and saved Marie. The end!

Someone, close this topic.

 

[Medicham12]

Uh-Uh. Only the topic starter can ask to close the topic. Sorry!

~

Sam and Marie got married in Peaceful Village 1 month later. At their honeymoon Marie and Sam had *insert you-know-what here*. And no one was raped.

9 months later............

 

[Snowfang]

^Ummm, they're already married. X.X

Back on topic:

That was when Death struck again. He brought any supporters of him and went down to Peaceful Village. There, Marie, Sam, Rosalina, and Tommy were against Death. There, Death lunged at Marie and they both nearly fell off a cliff with a ravine at the bottom. If either slipped, they would fall in the ravine below and possibly die. Marie managed to get herself up, but Death was still struggling to get up. Marie, with her soft heart, told Death to get up and offered her hand. Death tried to grab her, but went even lower on the cliff. That was when Marie said, "I'll help you." Then, Death looked at the ravine, and he smiled a crooked smile and said, "No. Never." and fell off, on purpose, in the churning waters.