Radi

[tamaturtle]

(that sounds like something Stevie would do xD but okay. I'll stick with Jade for now.)

"Uh... okay." All of this was making Jade increasingly on edge - she wanted to be out of here as soon as possible. This was a place she could easily get trapped in. She glanced at Cye. "So, uh..."

 

[tamatown123]

Name: Miss Specky

Alias: Works in Snack shop

Age: 16

Gender:Female

Personality: Kind to customers. Curious sometimes. Serious about getting things quick. .

Appearance: Wears apron when working in shop with name tag. Has laced shoes. Hair is tied up.

Power: Has secret powers which can stop time.

Is not a villian.

 

[tamaturtle]

(although I'm not the owner of this roleplay, I'd just like to say that your character seems a bit mary-sueish and you're godmodding. Like, I appriciate that my character is a villain, but you can't just decide what she does and where she lives without my permission, especially as I've already said where she lives... also, how can there be a jungle and/or ice buildings in a city?)

 

[tamatown123]

Sorry about that. I changed my character but please don't say anything bad about because its my character. No offence Sorry about that.

 

[tamaturtle]

(it's okay, just don't want you to fall into the mary-sue trap )

 

[Runner]

(Yeah, tamatown, you kinda need to work on RPing, and I have to agree with El (tamaturtle) on this one.. You can't just try to join a semi-literate RP with little or no RP experience, especially one of the more mature level like this. Although in the end it depends on what YellowJedi says, you may want to try to fix your form since it still feels mary sueish. Try consulting this guide here for info on how to make good RP characters. El and I aren't saying that your character isn't good, it's just your character needs patching up. In the end though, we're just trying to give you advice, and you aren't required to take our advice.)

 

[YellowJedi]

Yeah, El and and Runner already said exactly what I was going to. Like Runner said, I recommend the guide Runner linked highly, it's helped me out with my characters in the past. So for now I'm going to have to decline, sorry.

Cye yawned slightly, and rubbed his eyes. "Sorry..." he said softly. He was very tired, and although Jade was here he wanted to go to bed really badly.

 

[tamaturtle]

"I think I'd better go." Jade said softly. "See you tomorrow in science, yeah?"

 

[tamatown123]

Oh, sorry im new really sorry. What type of character can it be? Can you start the character off for me? i want it to be female

 

[tamatown123]

Oh, sorry im new really sorry. What type of character can it be? Can you start the character off for me? i want it to be female.

 

[tamatown123]

Oh, sorry im new really sorry. What type of character can it be? Can you start the character off for me? i want it to be female.

 

[tamatown123]

Oh, soz im new

 

[YellowJedi]

We can't make your character for you, you just have to think about it and try again.

Cye nodded. "Yeah, I'm pretty tired." he admitted. "Goodnight."

 

[YellowJedi]

We can't make your character for you, you just have to think about it and try again.

Cye nodded. "Yeah, I'm pretty tired." he admitted. "Goodnight."

 

[Runner]

Oh, sorry im new really sorry. What type of character can it be? Can you start the character off for me? i want it to be female

Yeah, sorry, we can't do it for you. You have to make forms on your own. However, maybe, try to base personality a character off a character from a book or something?

Stevie continued to om nom nom om snacks like a boss since he had nothing better to do. He yawned, thinking he might head home soon.

 

[tamaturtle]

Jade nodded, turning around and heading for the front door.

 

[YellowJedi]

Once Jade was out the door, Cye went to his room and collapse on his bed.

 

[tamaturtle]

Timeskip guys?

 

[tamatown123]

Too hard....

 

[YellowJedi]

Yeah, timeskip would be good.