Poem I Wrote..

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Jinx3295

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This is a poem I wrote, what do you think of it?

The Melody Of The Rain

Gray skies, are all I see.

The rain drops pour down.

The sky is crying, the sky is crying.

Whistling winds, the pitter-patter of the rain..

Music to my ears, love, it's music to my ears.

The wind is singing, the wind is singing.

"Come along, we shall dance in the rain."

But you stare at me, 'there is no music'

"The winds are blowing, the rain is pouring..

The leaves are dancing, how would they be dancing to no music?"

The leaves are dancing, the leaves are dancing.

"Come along with me, under the clouds.. beneath the sorrowful sky..

We shall dance, into the gray. We shall fade."

It is no storm... a symphony, a symphony more beautiful than any...

Come dance with me in the rain...

The sky is crying, the sky is crying.

The wind is singing, the wind is singing.

The leaves are dancing, the leaves are dancing.

The rain, wind and leaves..

They are all my music

 
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Flawless. Beautiful.

But who I am to comment on such a wonderful poem?

Please keep writing.

 

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