Please tell me if this is OK

[Wine_Deer]

okiez dokiez

*grabs the squirrel* I GOT IT!!! OH WAIT IT'S JUST A MONKEY WITH RABIES AAAAAAAAAAH *falls down tree, letting go of monkey*

We're so weird!

 

[Mametchi 4ever]

.... What about the story? *pulls you over to your writing desk from the tree*

 

[Kelly_Clarkson8]

I like your stories.

But if I could offer one tip, When writing a story, try and organize things a LITTLE more. IT's VERY good, but I feel that sometimes, your thoughts are jumbled. ^.^

From: A Fellow Lover Of Writing

 

[barky]

Getting excited and impatient lol joking! xD

[SIZE=24pt] ♥ [/SIZE]the story! Write more! Yah go to your writing desk stop chasing monkies with rabies and squirrels Lol

Best Wishes,

[[.x..barky..x.]]

 

[Mametchi 4ever]

I'm not rushing you.. But most of this page is full of comments and horseplaying..

 

[LilDewd]

Erm, my bad, sry.

 

[Wine_Deer]

sorry...

I'm workin on chapter 6 right now. I'll post it as soon as possible

 

[LilDewd]

Pplz, me and WineDeer are sorry for not posting for a while. We are STILL disscussing some ideas....

 

[kaffeeklatschgirl3]

Come on! Must-know-what-happens-next. COME ON!!! Don't discuss anything, just post it!!! I'm going mad here! *goes mad*

 

[LilDewd]

Sry, she WILL post soon..........(I hope!)

 

[Wine_Deer]

I'm jealus. Your phsicic. XD cant spell it.

HI EVERYBODY!!! Wine_Dizzle here to tell you I'm working on chapter 6.

Also I have edited some of it sooo yeah. Well in the story but I'm not editing it here on tamatalk.

 

[barky]

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

When do you think you will post?

Psychic. Lol. Me and the person sitting next to me did a story about someone who was psychic I said 'fizzy chic' so me and him say 'fizzy chic' whenever someone says psychic or one of us say psychic. 'Cept we say 'fizzy chic'.... You know what I mean

Post soon!!! [SIZE=14pt]♥ing[/SIZE] it!!!

Best Wishes,

[[.x..barky..x.]]

 

[Wine_Deer]

Weeell Chapter 6 is taking a while but I'm working on it. i'm planning on working on it most of the day.

Thanks for all the support people!!!!

 

[Mametchi 4ever]

Thank you..... Whew. *hands you a plate of cookies while you jot down the chapter on your writing desk*

 

[kaffeeklatschgirl3]

I'm jealus. Your phsicic. XD cant spell it.
HI EVERYBODY!!! Wine_Dizzle here to tell you I'm working on chapter 6.

Also I have edited some of it sooo yeah. Well in the story but I'm not editing it here on tamatalk.

psychic. Anyway...

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Sorry, that was kinda spammy. Just trying to make a point.

Tootles!

 

[barky]

Yeah lol that was a little spammy.

Anyway, I really cannot wait. Ahhhhh!!!!!! Going mad, I really love the book so far!!!! *Goes mad crazily*

 

[Wine_Deer]

*spazzes out under pressure* I'm working on it!!!!!!!!

LilDewd thanks for da dustin parts i added them

 

[LilDewd]

kk. WAITING! >.<

 

[Mametchi 4ever]

*waits* When is it coming?

 

[kaffeeklatschgirl3]

Are you finished yet? Are you finished yet? Are you finished yet? Are we annoying you? Are we annoying you? Are we annoying you?

*hands all kinds of yummy snacks to wine_deer, but gets hungry and eats most of them*