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Pink Hippopotumas

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Ok I've decided I'm going to start posting random poems on here, Just whatever rhymes. This one is about a dream where everything is normal than something abnormal happens.I have a different version but it would probably be for people 13 or older... so here's a weird, child freindly one...

Have you ever had

one of those dreams

where everything

is just as it seems,

Then,

out of no-where

comes a giant grizzly bear.

He attacks the city

He attacks the state

he attacks everywhere where he thinks there's steak. (lol that doesnt really rhyme.)

Then superman comes and saves the day

he grabs the bear up

and whisks him away

You wake up and it's only a dream.

Now everything is not what is seems.

 
I think it's really cute. :)

If you were to expand your use of language and maybe extend the poem a bit as a whole, it could turn out really really good!

 
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