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Nix.

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We Speak, But Are We Spoken To?

We walked along the line,

All messed up, but everything alright.

We never doubted you,

But are you really talking true?

 

Tell me you love me,

Tell me you need me.

Show you I want you,

Show you I hate you.

 

Calling each other names,

But only hiding in the shame.

We always cried for the lies,

But sometimes, I need you to be mine.

 

Tell me you love me,

Tell me you need me.

Show you I want you,

Show you I hate you.

 

Never facing up to the facts,

Always trying our best to relax.

Coldness turned to stone,

Sends shivers down my bones.

 

Tell me you love me,

Tell me you need me.

Show you I want you,

Show you I hate you.

 

You always showed me emotion.

Never knowing how it feels.

But you could always guess.

Couldn't you?

- {c} Nixeh Pwner, 6th June 2009.

 
Nice, Nixieh. :]

I love the chorus, and the song just flows greatly. I love it. <3

~Mew

 
Do you by any change listen to Green Day?

The first line reminded me of Boulevard Of Broken Dreams <3

I love it though, and I agree with ~Pokemon*Mew~, it flows really well :mellow:

<3

Do you write songs often?

 
Do you by any change listen to Green Day?The first line reminded me of Boulevard Of Broken Dreams <3

I love it though, and I agree with ~Pokemon*Mew~, it flows really well :p

<3

Do you write songs often?
I know this wasn't directed towards me, but, I listen to Green Day. Love 'em.

When I read the first line, at reminded me of the second verse of the song. I was like, "Ooh, Green Day much? <3"

And thanks, I guess. :]

~Mew

 
Well, thanks guys.

And yeah, I was actually listening to Green Day when I wrote it. xD

I must have sub-consciously put that in. o-o

 
Do you by any change listen to Green Day?The first line reminded me of Boulevard Of Broken Dreams <3

I love it though, and I agree with ~Pokemon*Mew~, it flows really well :D

<3

Do you write songs often?
LOL ALICE xDD

But, on topic, its a nice song Nix. I like it. =)

 
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Amazing, Nicola.

You're a great song writer. As people said before, it reminds me of Green Day. Which is a good thing.

I love you.<3

 
Awww, love it.

I write songs too!!

But be careful you don't

post it on lots of sites because

someone might claim it as there

own on another site. [:

Really like it.

 

Tamacandy

x

 
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