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Is my poem good?

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CuteDancingBailey

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My Poem! *clears throat and reads*

That Night

There was tha night you called me

your voice so crystal clear.

There was that night you called me

and we snuck out that year.

We ran behind the bushes

crouched down behind a tree.

You held my hand

and made a plan

to talk see and hear.

We sat on those tree stumps

and we held hands and talked.

You leaned in to kiss me

and I just ran away.

I was scared

I was frighten

and I didn't know what to do.

I know you wanted to kiss me

and maybe I wanted to kiss you.

I turned and saw your face

staring back at me.

I ran back over and hugged you

you kissed me on the cheack.

We snuck back home

waved goodbye

and went back inside.

What happened that night,

is between you and me.

What happened that night was just all a dream.

Is that very good?

It was one of my first poems I have written in a while.

 
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