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I only have the first half of the first chapter but here it is--

Chapter 1

Marrissa smiled “And that is why penguins can’t fly.”As she left the stage from teaching kids about animals she sighed “This is hard work!” she said petting her pet snow leopard ‘Snowy’.Snowy purred as if to say “Yes it is and I live here!”, Suddenly

Marrissa ’s mother Katelyn walked through the door “Marrissa, Miles is on the phone she has to talk to you.”Marrissa nodded shooing her mother out of the room “Hello?”

asked Marrissa into the receiver as she picked up the phone,”Marrissa?” came the answer in a muffled voice “Is that you?” “Yeah? Miles is something wrong you sound worried?” asked Marrissa shuffling her feet “Is Balto ok?” she asked quickly,”Oh yes. He is ok.” Replied Miley “Is it ok if I come over in the summer?” asked Miles “But Miles it’s November!” replied Marrissa laughing “Oh, right.” replied the voice “Well I have to go now, Bye.” she replied and hung up before Marrissa could even say good bye.”Marrissa is everything ok?” asked Katelyn who had walked in when she heard Marrissa say Balto, The Granger’s were a normal animal loving family, they own and work at ‘The West Place Zoo.’ Even their daughter Marrissa has a job at the Zoo. But when Marrissa’s best friend Miley moved to New York she had to hold their act together for the guests who came to learn about animals. Every night Miley and Marrissa talk on the phone but lately Miley has been acting strange, and they were worried. Marrissa put Snowy back into her habitat for the night which was a glass room with a rainforest inside, It was really cool but the cooler part was, It was Marrissa’s bedroom wall! Marrissa was happy with her life but couldn’t help being worried about Miles and her strange behavior lately, Marrissa lay awake that night worried about Miles, she decided to IM her friend who wasn’t online, but as soon as Marrissa hit enter she got a reply; this is what Marrissa said: Miles, Is everything ok in new York? Most important are you ok?...Luv you Marrissa

This is the reply: Marrissa, Everything is ok in New York,I have been ok ,how are you? Luv Miles

They went on for a few hours but soon after talking about her mother Miles had to sign off, Which made Marrissa worried, about the Webb’s, they seemed to be kepping a secret, “I hate secrets.” Marrissa whispered to herself sadly as she looked at her room, then at Snowy, “Why did she have to move?” she whispered to herself as she let herself into snowy’s cage and pet the muscular Snow leopard but Snowy pulled away and whined pitifully.

 
Do you like it?Anyone?My mom says mabey If i can find a childerns publisher i should try to get them to look at it please reply if you have any suggjestions on what should be bothing her, I can't think of anything.

 
yah that was good :] I love to write too. So what happened to miley???

 
ER, I am still working on it, have any ideas?I am blank,_________________________________XD Ummm I think her parents (They are arcioligests SP?) are going to come in to town to do a dig and Miley shows up right when they need her (snowy gets sick, when I figure it out I will post it, I hope you like it, and If it ever gets published that you buy it XD Nah...Just read it!

 
yah thats a good idea... maybe under the zoo is some fossils and stuff and like it links to snowy's past and that will help cure her. Thus throwing the two girls into a huge adventure/quest to save snowy!!!! :]

 
oooh... well ok.... and no prob... heh i love to write too so we gotta help each other out. i have part my story up on (non) tama talk. Tell me how it is :] Dont be afraid to give any tips

 
Maybe on there journey to cure snowy u can have miley eventually bond with a animal to :] Wolves, Bears, even squirells. the possibilities are endless

 
It's great!I love it, I think Kalya should end up being nice and saving Erica and kara from a danger then they become freinds with her and they teach her how to keep her hair straight XD

 
Thanks, as kandi kween pointed out that was a good idea for the dig and all so cheer me on when I get the 2nd chapter I will post it and So on, wish me luck!

 
hehe she is nice just a bit bossy, fierce, and says what she thinks. Kayla is da bubbly outgoing one, and erica the shy quiet nice one. :] They are all kind of the skewl outcast, and stick up for each other and trust one another. But yah some ordeal (don't know which) is gonna make her appreciate her friends more and be nicer. BTW kayla is the gaurdian of the sun kingdom, erica sky, kara moon. :] thats such a good idea... maybe i should have kara or erica have a brush with death...

ANYWAY... thanks much!!!!!!!!!

 
i think im gonna ask admin about a writers section for writers to share ideas and hellp each other :]

 
mostly the messy hair part was to explain what each of the characters hair was like... its hard to put that in over time ya know? like i have no idea what marrissa nor miley looks like... care to explain???

 
Marrissa is a red head, and miley has golden blonde/brown hair, you see me and my friend made a fake magazine and we drew them, I'll see if I can figure out the scanner but she has the magazine so It will be tomorrow...Yeah

 
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