It's A Poem About My Grandfather...

[YellowTamagotchi]

My Grandfather

I love him to death

I really do

Has this ever happen to you?

The day when my Grandfather past

I really thought he was going to last

My whole life with me and my family...

It was a horrid day, because I could see

The face of my mother, her saddness and grief

Her expression was not a lie

I couldn't help it, so I started to cry.

(This is real... R.I.P Grandfather)

 

[Goggle-Face]

Since this is more of a memorial then asking for help, I won't critique it this time.

I'm very sorry for your loss. I presume he passed due to old age? Again, I'm sorry for your loss. I hope you recover from the grief. My cat passed away around the beginning of the summer, so I know what it's like to have a family member die, but I don't exactly know what it's like to have a human family member die.

 

[YellowTamagotchi]

Thank you Goggle-Face. My grandfather died, because he choked and he couldn't breath. I am very sorry for the lost of your cat. It is very sad to lose a family member.

 

[Jadeie]

Naww, sorry about your loss.

I was very young when my Grandfather died, and the very last thing I said to him before he died was that I hated him.

 

[cpvr]

I'm sorry for your loss. I hope you're doing alright now though. *hugs*