Do you like my poem?

[blue_husky]

I love writing poems and Sayings

I love yours and sorry about how your feeling

 

[crazyy*tama]

needs improvement

 

[tamawho!!??]

What Crazyy*tama said. :x

 

[Mr.Brightside]

It echoes of teenage heartache,

Which is the largest cliche in the book,

We've read the same thing a thousand times,

A tradition I'd think we've long shook.

 

The first poem like this I read,

Was in fourteen ninety-one,

Not even the first one I read was original,

Something I wish I'd never done.

 

It does not mention the solace of love,

Nor the happiness, joy, or death,

I cannot imagine how this boy would even exist,

Though it is not proof I request.

 

We have read one thousand of these poems,

And I'm afraid they're all the same,

And, I'm sorry if I'm mistaken,

But you never mentioned my name.

"A Poem Of Automobiles and Dinosaur Dreams"

Four stanzas written by Mr. Alex Dinasour May Stump Loser Yoshi Jasprr Brightside.

 

[[-Horizons///]]

It echoes of teenage heartache,Which is the largest cliche in the book,

We've read the same thing a thousand times,

A tradition I'd think we've long shook.

 

The first poem like this I read,

Was in fourteen ninety-one,

Not even the first one I read was original,

Something I wish I'd never done.

 

It does not mention the solace of love,

Nor the happiness, joy, or death,

I cannot imagine how this boy would even exist,

Though it is not proof I request.

 

We have read one thousand of these poems,

And I'm afraid they're all the same,

And, I'm sorry if I'm mistaken,

But you never mentioned my name.

"A Poem Of Automobiles and Dinosaur Dreams"

Four stanzas written by Mr. Alex Dinasour May Stump Loser Yoshi Jasprr Brightside.

-Applauds-

(This is . E c l i p s e (Becca) again. I was sick of being called a raging Twilight lover.)

 

[Self:.:Pity]

i love you becca Exactly right

I love her more <3

Mmm, Musicalclouds, do I know you? again, I had to ask X3

 

[hstama2]

its a great poem. it made me sad. but in a good way!

 

[x.MusicalClouds]

I love her more <3
Mmm, Musicalclouds, do I know you? again, I had to ask X3

No, I love her more!

Mm, it's ChunkyPlatypus/I_P. xP Love you, Axie.

 

[x.Ryancloud]

It echoes of teenage heartache,Which is the largest cliche in the book,

We've read the same thing a thousand times,

A tradition I'd think we've long shook.

 

The first poem like this I read,

Was in fourteen ninety-one,

Not even the first one I read was original,

Something I wish I'd never done.

 

It does not mention the solace of love,

Nor the happiness, joy, or death,

I cannot imagine how this boy would even exist,

Though it is not proof I request.

 

We have read one thousand of these poems,

And I'm afraid they're all the same,

And, I'm sorry if I'm mistaken,

But you never mentioned my name.

"A Poem Of Automobiles and Dinosaur Dreams"

Four stanzas written by Mr. Alex Dinasour May Stump Loser Yoshi Jasprr Brightside.

Amazingg.

 

[Mr.Brightside]

' date='December 07, 2008 11:30 am'] -Applauds-
(This is . E c l i p s e (Becca) again. I was sick of being called a raging Twilight lover.)

Why hello, Becca :]

And thank you.<3

And thank you, Vivienne.<3

I do my best.

 

[x.MusicalClouds]

It echoes of teenage heartache,Which is the largest cliche in the book,

We've read the same thing a thousand times,

A tradition I'd think we've long shook.

 

The first poem like this I read,

Was in fourteen ninety-one,

Not even the first one I read was original,

Something I wish I'd never done.

 

It does not mention the solace of love,

Nor the happiness, joy, or death,

I cannot imagine how this boy would even exist,

Though it is not proof I request.

 

We have read one thousand of these poems,

And I'm afraid they're all the same,

And, I'm sorry if I'm mistaken,

But you never mentioned my name.

"A Poem Of Automobiles and Dinosaur Dreams"

Four stanzas written by Mr. Alex Dinasour May Stump Loser Yoshi Jasprr Brightside.

Ahluxx...it's lovely.

 

[[-Horizons///]]

Now now, Stephanie, Axie, Sango, there's enough of me for all of you.

Though I'm devoted solely to Axie forever<3

 

[Self:.:Pity]

No, I love her more!
Mm, it's ChunkyPlatypus/I_P. xP Love you, Axie.

Oh.

OH.

Why didnt you say?

I thought you were a stalker Admirer.

Oh, I do love you too.

Becca, I understand X3

everyone has to share

 

[lainabug01]

I think it's good, but it needs improvement. That's all.