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That's fair enough, tamagotchis will become more prominent later on in the story, the first chapter was just designed as an introduction, therefore it may be a little light on tamagotchis. Thanks for the feedback ^_^

Well, my new story Tear Drop Tamagotchi has now begun, and depending on when you're reading this, the prologue could have just come out, or I could have just finished writing it! So, what do you think of it so far, and how could I improve it?

Previous: PROLOGUE - https://www.tamatalk.com/IB/topic/184620-tear-drop-tamagotchi-prologue/?do=findComment&comment=3215242 This is Chapter 1 of my new story, Tear Drop Tamagotchi, enjoy! The sun beamed down into the roasting hot classroom. Sweat poured off its many inmates, making...

Next: CHAPTER 1: THE GIFT AWAKENS - https://www.tamatalk.com/IB/topic/184627-tear-drop-tamagotchi-the-gift-awakens-chapter-1/?do=findComment&comment=3215299 Hey everyone, I'm back and writing a new story. Most of you won't know or remember any of my work as I haven't written in a very long...

I'd like to make a really huge apology for the massive delay between releasing parts. I haven't forgot about the story, but I haven't added to it for the last 3 and a bit months so I'm still just finishing Part 3. I decided rather than make you wait any longer, I'd release Part 3.1 now (which I...

Hi all! I'm really sorry about the huge (4 month wait) for the next part of Tamagotchi Blood but I have been hugely busy. Enjoy! Part 3-1 ‘'And in the news today... We apologise but we have overestimated the gold blooded death toll. In reality, very few tamagotchis have died and nobody needs...

I'm sorry about the delay in releasing the next part guys - but I've got writers' block, and on top of that my computer is really slow. I hope to have it out on Monday. Sorry again

Thanks for that. In Part 5 (or maybe 6) we go to Laura's school, where there's a lot of cultural diversity and people of all bloods. I don't want to give too much away now, but I think that's what you're talking about.

Ok. I'll bear that in mind. I mean, I know you're supposed to start a new line for speech and everything, but yeah thanks for the advice.

I'm currently doing a detective series. I only started it a couple of days ago so I'm still on the first story, but you can expect to see it on TamaTalk by mid-September (or maybe before, depending on how Tamagotchi Blood goes).

@NewtEye 10 - Because you never know how long it will take. It doesn't just consist of writing either. I need to write it, then proof read it, then plan later parts and then edit it so that it will flow better with the later parts. And anyway, I do have other things I want to do other than write...

@Martello737 - Part 3 is a bit like a 2 part special because it contains two parts (Part 3-1 and Part 3-2). But don't worry, they'll both be released together @NewtEye10 - I'm about half way through writing Part 3 at the moment because I've just finished Part 3-1. Well actually I think I might...

It varies depending on the part. And I can't write if I'm not in the mood. So if I feel like it, I could write one part in between 1 and 4 hours. But that's only when I feel like it. I think that Part 3 will be out on Friday, or possibly before but don't count on it. Part 4 might be out...

Thanks for the kind comments guys. Is there anything you think I could improve on?

I think it's great! I'd love to see you write more short stories.

Prologue Part 1 Part 2 ‘We interrupt this programme to bring you an urgent news broadcast. The government suspect that over two thousand gold blooded tamagotchis have been killed for blood in the last three days alone. We would like to remind all citizens of Tamagotchi Plains that killing...

Prologue Part 2 Part 1 I turned on the television. 'And in the news today... Many gold blooded tamagotchis are being hunted down in the streets for their blood. When killed, a tamagotchi can produce up to 6 litres of blood. That means for every gold blood that the lower blood hunters manage...

Part 1 Part 2 Hi all. You may remember some stories I have written such as Baines, The Return of Baines, Life in Tamagotchi Plains and Tama Wars. I haven't written any tamagotchi stories in a while and now I'm back to do a bit more writing. This story is called Tamagotchi Blood and explores...

Then he was awake. Lying on the pavement outside school. Several kids were gathered around Ben, trying to revive him, flapping things like their maths books over his head. 'He's awake!' one girl yelled, 'He's not dead Margaret, you owe me a fiver!' 'Sir, sir, he's moving!' another shouted...

Well, my new story is out. As I write it, I think, what a masterpiece. But what do you, the reader think of it? PS. More parts coming soon!