Why Should I live on..

[CuteDancingBailey]

Please leave comments and critisism! I would love to have some help!

Cisit this link for part one! https://www.tamatalk.com/IB/index.php?showtopic=78694

 

[tamafan_95]

um hi is there eney think i can help u with??coz u seem well upset

 

[CuteDancingBailey]

No lolz it's a made up story.

 

[cutie_pop]

Your story started out sad but I think it's really well written, it's just the 2nd chapter was a bit short...

 

[CuteDancingBailey]

I was in a hurry that's why the second chapter was so short.

 

[cutie_pop]

Oh ok, don't blame you then sorry if I sounded mean.

 

[CuteDancingBailey]

Oh ok, don't blame you then sorry if I sounded mean.

No you didn't sound mean at al!

 

[tulip978]

Your story is great! It's really sad. But I ♥ it 2!

 

[CuteDancingBailey]

Your story is great! It's really sad. But I ♥ it 2!

Thank you so much!