dazzilitchigirl TamaTalk Supporter TamaTalk Angelgotchi Joined Dec 13, 2009 Messages 2,760 Reaction score 598 Location UK Mar 31, 2013 #1 Only comment if the story has actually been approved yet.
tamatown123 Well-known member Joined Dec 5, 2011 Messages 1,486 Reaction score 301 Location UK (England) Apr 1, 2013 #2 Awesome story! ^_^
*Hayden* Well-known member Joined Mar 2, 2013 Messages 1,762 Reaction score 818 Location Sydney Apr 1, 2013 #3 Interesting!
♥Khipmunk♥ Well-known member Joined Nov 19, 2012 Messages 271 Reaction score 56 Apr 5, 2013 #4 A little too strange for my liking. But overall it was kind of fun to read.
dazzilitchigirl TamaTalk Supporter TamaTalk Angelgotchi Joined Dec 13, 2009 Messages 2,760 Reaction score 598 Location UK Apr 7, 2013 #5 Thanks for the feedback, everyone! But Kuribotchi, why do you hate it? What could I improve?
SupahCow090 Well-known member Joined Jan 11, 2013 Messages 499 Reaction score 364 Apr 10, 2013 #6 It was somewhat a good laugh but I think I wanted more. It seems to fast-paced for a unique story. I'm expecting a second part ) Good Job )
It was somewhat a good laugh but I think I wanted more. It seems to fast-paced for a unique story. I'm expecting a second part ) Good Job )