Tamagotchi-Ashu
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OMG!!! I'm SOOOOOOOO sorry about the last one! I accidentally hit 'enter' without meaning to, and it was too late to stop it. So here I'm writing the REAL story. Sorry once again. 
I'm also going to write a team story like this, so be sure to see that when it comes. I promise I won't screw up again!
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Violetchi and Kizatchi walked across the schoolyard. Most of the people there didn't see them, but the ones that did slowly turned back to their friends and whispered in their ear. This was just another typical day for Violetchi and Kizatchi. Then Violetchi went to talk to Memetchi, leaving her brother alone.
"Hi, Memetchi," Violetchi said. "The flowers look beautiful today."
The people around them sniggered. Violetchi distinctly heard Makiko whipser into Ringotchi's ear, "Hippie". Violetchi ignored her as usual, but felt sadness on the inside. Memetchi glared at Makiko.
"Don't listen to them, Violetchi." she said. "They're just jealous."
"Jealous?" Makiko said, smiling. "Why would we be jealous of her and her nature-loving freaks of a family? No thank you, I'd rather be the stylish, beautiful Makiko I am."
Memetchi opened her mouth, but the homeroom bell rang. Makiko went to join her friends in the school building.
"See you later, freak!" she called out. Violetchi walked slowly into the building, dragging her feet.
Kizatchi wasn't having much of a good day either. In Mr.Canvas's class, he stared longingly out the window, admiring the pretty flowers. He had an extra rose, which he threw out the window. Kuromametchi, who sat behind him, laughed.
"If you love nature so much, why don't you marry it?" he said, smiling. Kizatchi's face turned red. Mr.Canvas, hearing noise in the classroom, turned around.
"Kizatchi, pay attention!" he snapped. Kuromametchi laughed, and Kizatchi put his head down on his desk.
By dissmissal, both Kizatchi and Violetchi were feeling depressed. Kuromametchi and Makiko were standing out on the schoolyard, laughing and teasing them. All of a sudden, it started raining. Violetchi and Kizatchi stood under the trees, being their friends. But Kuromametchi and Makiko weren't. They ran under the trees, but the trees and flowers frowned at them (everthing in TamaTown has a face!), and pushed them out into the rain. When it stopped, Kuromametchi and Makiko were soaked. One of the meanest flowers pushed them both into a blob of mud, getting them covered in it. Violetchi and Kizatchi watched and laughed at them. Nature had triumphed over bullies.
[SIZE=14pt]The End[/SIZE]
I'm also going to write a team story like this, so be sure to see that when it comes. I promise I won't screw up again!-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Violetchi and Kizatchi walked across the schoolyard. Most of the people there didn't see them, but the ones that did slowly turned back to their friends and whispered in their ear. This was just another typical day for Violetchi and Kizatchi. Then Violetchi went to talk to Memetchi, leaving her brother alone.
"Hi, Memetchi," Violetchi said. "The flowers look beautiful today."
The people around them sniggered. Violetchi distinctly heard Makiko whipser into Ringotchi's ear, "Hippie". Violetchi ignored her as usual, but felt sadness on the inside. Memetchi glared at Makiko.
"Don't listen to them, Violetchi." she said. "They're just jealous."
"Jealous?" Makiko said, smiling. "Why would we be jealous of her and her nature-loving freaks of a family? No thank you, I'd rather be the stylish, beautiful Makiko I am."
Memetchi opened her mouth, but the homeroom bell rang. Makiko went to join her friends in the school building.
"See you later, freak!" she called out. Violetchi walked slowly into the building, dragging her feet.
Kizatchi wasn't having much of a good day either. In Mr.Canvas's class, he stared longingly out the window, admiring the pretty flowers. He had an extra rose, which he threw out the window. Kuromametchi, who sat behind him, laughed.
"If you love nature so much, why don't you marry it?" he said, smiling. Kizatchi's face turned red. Mr.Canvas, hearing noise in the classroom, turned around.
"Kizatchi, pay attention!" he snapped. Kuromametchi laughed, and Kizatchi put his head down on his desk.
By dissmissal, both Kizatchi and Violetchi were feeling depressed. Kuromametchi and Makiko were standing out on the schoolyard, laughing and teasing them. All of a sudden, it started raining. Violetchi and Kizatchi stood under the trees, being their friends. But Kuromametchi and Makiko weren't. They ran under the trees, but the trees and flowers frowned at them (everthing in TamaTown has a face!), and pushed them out into the rain. When it stopped, Kuromametchi and Makiko were soaked. One of the meanest flowers pushed them both into a blob of mud, getting them covered in it. Violetchi and Kizatchi watched and laughed at them. Nature had triumphed over bullies.
[SIZE=14pt]The End[/SIZE]
