ChamametchiandMametchi
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Whaddaya think of Part 3 of The Tale of Twinkle and Sparky? I will take any tips you give me!
The Tale of Twinkle and Sparky (Part 3): The Babies Are Gone! - Comments
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I like it, and you're definitely improving, but I suggest a slower pace and maybe more developed characters rather than just good and bad. But it's good and I'm looking forward to the next part! 
ChamametchiandMametchi
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Thanks. I am now going to make the next part.I like it, and you're definitely improving, but I suggest a slower pace and maybe more developed characters rather than just good and bad. But it's good and I'm looking forward to the next part!
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