*I had posted this on a log but found out the story line was more like a story! but its really based on the tama i really DO have.
This is going to be a Journal type thing.
For Wednesday : Mary is now on her own. Her father... a Chomametchi, had left at 12:00 AM.
I named her mary because christmas is so soon. She is a female. And she has also finished her afternoon nap. I forgot to cleen a mess. So she had a mess by her bed. She is fully happy and 3 ibs. overweight.
Family History: Mary takes much pride in her history. She is the 3rd Generation of Healthy tama's that are very wealthy. Her grandparent's and parent had both gotten to 9999 points at least 3 times and she was left with alot of inheratence. The king of tama planet was also awaiting her arrival. Her parents had also gotten alot of social status from him, because her grandmother had donated 30000 points to the king.
1. Grandparent: Female, healthy, furawatchi-leaftchi whatever you call it. The matchmaker had come to her.
2. Parent: Male, healthy, like i said, a Chomametchi. The matchmaker had come to him also.
Third in line will be herself. Mary. In a line of healthy ones. She hoped she would live up to her name and her bloodline.
She is now crying. She is praised and happy.
She is now fed and full and very contented. She can't wait until she evolves.
MORE TOMARROW
So far she is staying and going with expectations... but will it work out in the end?
For Thursday :*The contraption is a computer if you don't get
it*
Mary blushes with shame as her owner looks at her to see
what she had evolved into. Her family blood line COULD NOT
have ever evolved into how ugly she must look now. If only
she would have evolved into a cute child... how could she
possible be cute and healthy? Mary had evolved into a
Kuchitamatchi... she lost most of her self esteem as she
looked itn the mirror... she didn't think she looked healthy
or cute at all. She saw her owner squeeling in a language
she couldn't quite understand... "she is mad that i didn't evolve
into a cute tamagotchi." she sighed.
~~~~*MY POINT OF VEIW*~~~~
HOW CUTE!!!! HOW PRECIOUSE!!!! I yelled as i saw what
my tama had evolved into, she couldn't be cuter. She lookes
just like her father when he was a child. She must be sooo
happy!
~~~~*Back to mary*~~~~
She now couldn't hold it any longer, she needed to go to the
bathroom. She made the wavy lines showing that she needed
to go. but to no avail. Her owner didn't notice. Mary finally
relived herself and suddenly felt a little hungry. Her owner
finally paused to look at her, and to clean her poop. While
looking at her hunger screen her owner say a missing heart
on hunger. She was fed immediatly and mary
thought ,"Great now im overweight..."
But her owner had also noticed and started to play"get".
once she was comftorably in the right weight she saw her
owner get onto a chair and start playing on the *contraption*
that helped her go to tamatown to do things.
"Yes... just what i wanted... to let my dad see me right now.
When i am ugly and very ashamed."
Mary watched the contraptions screen show her home planet.
As she watched her owner type in a password to go to her fathers
house she now wished she could run and hide.
She was forced by the contraption to go and visit her parent.
When she walked in the door, her father gasped and tears
came to his eyes. "Dad... im sorry. Im sorry for disgrasing
you with what i evolved into." His sad emotion quickly was
hidden with a stern look, as his mouth formed words.
Mary waited uncomfortably for him to start the sentence. She
Thought she knew what he was going to say. She had been
imagining it during the walk to his house. Mary snapped out of her thoughts as her father finally started talking."Mary. You haven't
disgrased anyone. If you think you have disgrased me then, I
don't know what to think. I thought i had told you alot about me
when i was with you for two days. If you think your a disgraise
then i don't know if i have the heart to tell you that i too, was
a Kuchitamatchi." Mary gaped at this news. She now felt the
slightest trace of hope.Mary felt a grin pulling at her overly
large mouth.
For Friday : Mary grinned as she remembered the words her father had so carefully chosen when he told her that he had been a kuchitamathi. She felt that a huge burden being slightly pulled off her child like shoulders. She wasn’t entirely happy yet. She knew there now was hope but only a slight trace. All of a sudden she felt that too familiar feeling of being squeezed and pulled and shoved at the same time. There really wasn’t any other explaination to the feeling of evolving. She didn’t entirely like the feeling but she couldn’t evoide it. “Maybe… I will someday grow accostomed to it.” Mary thought bitterly. Now her vision was starting to flask unbearably. Mary squeezed her eyes shut and clenched her teeth waiting for this horrible encounter to end. She finally opened her eyes blinking and knew she was much taller and stalkier. Her owner had been watching her all this time she discovered. Her owner who Mary had yesterday decided to name Anna for that was her username, scowled in distaste but Mary didn’t notice. Mary looked in the mirror and when she saw herself managed a weak smile dispite the feelings rushing over her like wildfire in a meadow of wheat.
Mary had finally interpreted that scowl that Anna had shown as a bad sign. But that was just her opinion. Maybe it was good. Mary didn’t think she looked exacly ugly, but not exacly beautiful. Since the encounter with her father she didn’t really think the same way. She thought through everything more thouroughly now. Mary no longer dwelled on the negatives of herself, but the positives. Mary had evolved into a Obotchi. “Well, My first positive is that I have always wanted to be tall and now I am, my second positive is that I am one of the few tamagotchi that have hair.”
Mary giggled at this for it was just a curl of hair at the front of her head. But it was a start.
*hope you liked it!!!* if i can edit this then i will add more AND IN FAN FICTION COMMENTS WHERE YOU CAN COMMENT OF FAN FICTION WILL ANYONE TELL ME IF THEY THINK I HAVE ANY POTENTIAL OF BEING AN AUTHOR?
This is going to be a Journal type thing.
For Wednesday : Mary is now on her own. Her father... a Chomametchi, had left at 12:00 AM.
I named her mary because christmas is so soon. She is a female. And she has also finished her afternoon nap. I forgot to cleen a mess. So she had a mess by her bed. She is fully happy and 3 ibs. overweight.
Family History: Mary takes much pride in her history. She is the 3rd Generation of Healthy tama's that are very wealthy. Her grandparent's and parent had both gotten to 9999 points at least 3 times and she was left with alot of inheratence. The king of tama planet was also awaiting her arrival. Her parents had also gotten alot of social status from him, because her grandmother had donated 30000 points to the king.
1. Grandparent: Female, healthy, furawatchi-leaftchi whatever you call it. The matchmaker had come to her.
2. Parent: Male, healthy, like i said, a Chomametchi. The matchmaker had come to him also.
Third in line will be herself. Mary. In a line of healthy ones. She hoped she would live up to her name and her bloodline.
She is now crying. She is praised and happy.
She is now fed and full and very contented. She can't wait until she evolves.
MORE TOMARROW
So far she is staying and going with expectations... but will it work out in the end?
For Thursday :*The contraption is a computer if you don't get
it*
Mary blushes with shame as her owner looks at her to see
what she had evolved into. Her family blood line COULD NOT
have ever evolved into how ugly she must look now. If only
she would have evolved into a cute child... how could she
possible be cute and healthy? Mary had evolved into a
Kuchitamatchi... she lost most of her self esteem as she
looked itn the mirror... she didn't think she looked healthy
or cute at all. She saw her owner squeeling in a language
she couldn't quite understand... "she is mad that i didn't evolve
into a cute tamagotchi." she sighed.
~~~~*MY POINT OF VEIW*~~~~
HOW CUTE!!!! HOW PRECIOUSE!!!! I yelled as i saw what
my tama had evolved into, she couldn't be cuter. She lookes
just like her father when he was a child. She must be sooo
happy!
~~~~*Back to mary*~~~~
She now couldn't hold it any longer, she needed to go to the
bathroom. She made the wavy lines showing that she needed
to go. but to no avail. Her owner didn't notice. Mary finally
relived herself and suddenly felt a little hungry. Her owner
finally paused to look at her, and to clean her poop. While
looking at her hunger screen her owner say a missing heart
on hunger. She was fed immediatly and mary
thought ,"Great now im overweight..."
But her owner had also noticed and started to play"get".
once she was comftorably in the right weight she saw her
owner get onto a chair and start playing on the *contraption*
that helped her go to tamatown to do things.
"Yes... just what i wanted... to let my dad see me right now.
When i am ugly and very ashamed."
Mary watched the contraptions screen show her home planet.
As she watched her owner type in a password to go to her fathers
house she now wished she could run and hide.
She was forced by the contraption to go and visit her parent.
When she walked in the door, her father gasped and tears
came to his eyes. "Dad... im sorry. Im sorry for disgrasing
you with what i evolved into." His sad emotion quickly was
hidden with a stern look, as his mouth formed words.
Mary waited uncomfortably for him to start the sentence. She
Thought she knew what he was going to say. She had been
imagining it during the walk to his house. Mary snapped out of her thoughts as her father finally started talking."Mary. You haven't
disgrased anyone. If you think you have disgrased me then, I
don't know what to think. I thought i had told you alot about me
when i was with you for two days. If you think your a disgraise
then i don't know if i have the heart to tell you that i too, was
a Kuchitamatchi." Mary gaped at this news. She now felt the
slightest trace of hope.Mary felt a grin pulling at her overly
large mouth.
For Friday : Mary grinned as she remembered the words her father had so carefully chosen when he told her that he had been a kuchitamathi. She felt that a huge burden being slightly pulled off her child like shoulders. She wasn’t entirely happy yet. She knew there now was hope but only a slight trace. All of a sudden she felt that too familiar feeling of being squeezed and pulled and shoved at the same time. There really wasn’t any other explaination to the feeling of evolving. She didn’t entirely like the feeling but she couldn’t evoide it. “Maybe… I will someday grow accostomed to it.” Mary thought bitterly. Now her vision was starting to flask unbearably. Mary squeezed her eyes shut and clenched her teeth waiting for this horrible encounter to end. She finally opened her eyes blinking and knew she was much taller and stalkier. Her owner had been watching her all this time she discovered. Her owner who Mary had yesterday decided to name Anna for that was her username, scowled in distaste but Mary didn’t notice. Mary looked in the mirror and when she saw herself managed a weak smile dispite the feelings rushing over her like wildfire in a meadow of wheat.
Mary had finally interpreted that scowl that Anna had shown as a bad sign. But that was just her opinion. Maybe it was good. Mary didn’t think she looked exacly ugly, but not exacly beautiful. Since the encounter with her father she didn’t really think the same way. She thought through everything more thouroughly now. Mary no longer dwelled on the negatives of herself, but the positives. Mary had evolved into a Obotchi. “Well, My first positive is that I have always wanted to be tall and now I am, my second positive is that I am one of the few tamagotchi that have hair.”
Mary giggled at this for it was just a curl of hair at the front of her head. But it was a start.
*hope you liked it!!!* if i can edit this then i will add more AND IN FAN FICTION COMMENTS WHERE YOU CAN COMMENT OF FAN FICTION WILL ANYONE TELL ME IF THEY THINK I HAVE ANY POTENTIAL OF BEING AN AUTHOR?
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