cutie_pop
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"Why?" Trent asked demandingly. Miku sighed.
"Jake likes that name." she said. Trent gave up
on complaining and said "Ok." with a sigh. " Well I'M
not gonna name little matey over there" nodding towards
his little boy slepping in the cot."Something average."he said, glaring at Miku. "I'll name him something unusual, something exquizard, something" he paused for a second. "Something from another country."he said smiling. "How about...Kenta!" he asked with a sparkle in his eyes. Miku shrugged. "Ok then." "YES!" Trent whispered happily pumping his fists.
Everything went fine for the next 24 hours and eventually, the time came when Trent and Miku had to leave. "Good bye dwady mummmmmy" Jake and Kenta said in unison as they waved, tears rolling down their face.(Well I kinda can't say cheek can I, I don't know if tamas have cheeks!). "Good bye...ur sons." Trent said, still surprised that he had 2 kids. "Bbbbye." Miku answered in tears. "Bye." Melissa and Anna said, their eyes swimming with tears. Trent and Miku waved sadly and went floating up to Tama Planet.
Still to be continued...
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"Jake likes that name." she said. Trent gave up
on complaining and said "Ok." with a sigh. " Well I'M
not gonna name little matey over there" nodding towards
his little boy slepping in the cot."Something average."he said, glaring at Miku. "I'll name him something unusual, something exquizard, something" he paused for a second. "Something from another country."he said smiling. "How about...Kenta!" he asked with a sparkle in his eyes. Miku shrugged. "Ok then." "YES!" Trent whispered happily pumping his fists.
Everything went fine for the next 24 hours and eventually, the time came when Trent and Miku had to leave. "Good bye dwady mummmmmy" Jake and Kenta said in unison as they waved, tears rolling down their face.(Well I kinda can't say cheek can I, I don't know if tamas have cheeks!). "Good bye...ur sons." Trent said, still surprised that he had 2 kids. "Bbbbye." Miku answered in tears. "Bye." Melissa and Anna said, their eyes swimming with tears. Trent and Miku waved sadly and went floating up to Tama Planet.
Still to be continued...
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Can you plzzz send me a pm telling me what you think of this story and how I can improve it? Thanx!
