Steve's Goal

[Jadeie]

One Day. A Very Foggy Day. Mametchi And His Wife (Chantotchi) Had Their First Baby. They Named It Steve. It Was Many Days After Steve Was Born. In His Cot He Evolved Into A Harutchi. He Ran To His Mum's And Dad's Bedroom To Show Them He Evolved. But No One Was There. He Checked All Over The House. No Sign Of His Mum Or Dad. " WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!" Cried Steve. He Looked At The Clock ( He Was Very Good At Clocks) And Saw It Was Time For Preschool. "If You There Mummy Bye!" Yelled Steve. He Ran To Preschool. He Got There Just in Time For A little Play. He Met A Lovely Girl Puchitchi. he Developed A Crush On Her ( her names Susan) And He Played Truth And Dare And This Is What Happened: "Okays, You Truth Me!" Said Steve "Okay!, Have You Ever Kissed A Girl?" Said Susan " Ummmm, I'll Go With Dare," Replied Steve "Okay Then.... Kiss Me!" Said Susan "Ummmm, O..... O..... OK" Said Steve As He Leaned Over To Give A Kiss.

 

[Shimashimatchi]

When he got home he found out his father died.

"Your father had a secret. He had the swine flu. He did not want to tell you because he worried that you would be scared." His mother, said.

She then grew into

 

[Zegotchi]

Steve then, found his goal HAD to be to try to stop the swine flu!! He searched all over the country to find ingrediants for a cure! But all her found was a red and black banana snake. (Fiction) He gave it to his mumy and said, "We wont get swine flu if we both eat some of it! But I've gotta get my special friend!" Steve then ran back to preschool and then....

 

[Jadeie]

i forgot to tell you THE MUM AND DAD WENT TO TAMAPLANET!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

so there is no mum or dad there......

and hey he lent over to give her a kiss he didnt give a kiss!!! so when did that happen?

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he picked up susan and carried her home. "when we eat the red and black banana snake you eat middle" said steve

 

[Shimashimatchi]

But... The story would be good if him, his mother, and Susan stopped the swine flu... Never mind

 

[Jadeie]

and t steve's goal.... i thought he would go on an adventure to save his mum and dad...

 

[Shimashimatchi]

Oh well!

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So Steve and Susan said good bye to Steve's mom, went out, and their adventure began...

 

[Shimashimatchi]

And just sayin' everyone gets to control the story, not just you, so you have to comment quickly if you want that part of the story, so like Zegotchi said, his goal was to stop swine flu. And it was your responsibility to say they went to tama planet EARIER. Not at this time.

 

[Gotchi Guy46]

Steve had got lonely,and decided to ask his parents for a brother.

 

[Shimashimatchi]

But I thout his dad died. :furawatchi:

 

[Shimashimatchi]

I'm just ignoring your comment, 'cause its random & off-topic.

Steve met up to an ojitchi who had swine flu.

 

[Jadeie]

Steve Didn't Know What To Do So He Pucnhed Him Out Then Brang Him To The Doctors.

 

[Shimashimatchi]

Then Steve's mom called him and said that if he rides on the magic warp star, he will cure everyone's swine flu. Then Steve transformed into Kirby!

 

[Jadeie]

ooc:

Then He Stopped Daydreaming At the Swine Flu Center

 

[Shimashimatchi]

The tama mayor appeared.

"Thank you for riding the warp star!" he said.

Steve looked at his hands. They were pink!

"Oh no!" Steve thought. "The daydream was real!" He had became Kirby. He did find the warp star. But days later, people had it again.

"The legend... I thought it was true..." a said.

 

[Jadeie]

"that i think that i have the power to make kirby not kirby!' whispered (plum). She Layed Her Hand Onto Steve's Shoulder. Steve Slowy Morphed Back Into Well.... Steve! Stve. Steves Mother And Susan Raced Through The Hospital And Jumped Out The Window. Steve And Susan Raced Ahead. Steve Went At A Halt. He Looked Back to See That His Mother Was Trapped In A Window. "Go Ahead! Leave Me Here!" Said Steve's Mother

Steve....