Skrillex Sweetinsour and the Great Patchi-Patchi Race: Part 1 Comments!

[ChamametchiandMametchi]

What do you think of my new fan fiction series? I think I did a preeeeetty good job introducing the character by using a picture of the character, and describing him/her.

Now I'm sorry if Part 1 is too short, because I usually get writer's block on the last sentence that I typed. So, I just post what I have thought, and I'm sure it'll be fine.

Thanks for reading! - Chama

P.S. - The original drawing of this character belongs to pervyjrocker of DeviantART. I do not own this character, but the name I gave him.

 

[Eternal Mametchi Fan]

I really liked it! I can't wait for Part 2. I liked how you included Yonepatchi.