Poetry

[blue♣slip]

do you like poetry? i do. i also write it. feel free to share!

[please dont copy ANYONE]

a window into a kinder dimension,

seeking refuge through your attention.

a long-lost image from the past,

you always wonder, but there is not need to ask.

losing yourself, only by sight,

just going back to just pass by.

everything how it once was,

how you loved it, just because.

you smile as you remember the time that has passed,

happy you still have the photograph.

i've got more, this really is'nt one of my best, but i wrote it this morning.i might post more. anyone else write?

 

[temari_sensei_girl]

I like poetry, but It's um... how do I put this... emo?

It's, like, really dark and murderous and stuff and i can give a link to were I put my poetry on the internet, but I don't think it would be apropreate to put it on tamatalk.

link-(may not work. not sure)

(by the way, You're a great poet yourself)

 

[cutie_pop]

Yes! I write poetry but right now, they are really simple poems. I haven't written anything for a long time but I'm hoping to improve. ^^

 

[Tama*Lover]

I personally don't like poetry that much. I don't mind writing poetry, but I wouldn't decide to do that during my free time. If I had to write a poem for schoolwork, I would be cool with it. I just don't enjoy writing it, but I don't care about if I have to write about something using poetry.

 

[~TamaBloom12~]

yes, but I'm not about to share them with all of tamatalk >.< they're kinda.......Depressing.

you're good by the way

 

[tamaw/pants]

I have one or two somewhere but I don't feel like finding them. I usualy don't just write stuff for fun but sometimes I do.

 

[~»tamagirl101«~]

I love to write poems. They aren't depressing though. My favourite ones that I wrote is are as follows:

GOSSIP

In every coversation

I dwell every lip

I tumble out with envy

And at your heart I rip

I tear apart your friendships

And whisper in your dreams

Although I am a craving

I make you want to scream

At first I may seem harmless

Just a senseless little quip

But soon am a yearning

Into your mind I rip

Even though I'm abstract

See the damage I can do?

For my name is Gossip

And like fire I consume you

HE ONLY TAKES THE BEST

God saw she was getting tired

And cure was not to be

So He put His arms around her

And whispered, "Come with Me."

With tearfilled eyes we watched her

Suffer and fade away

Although we loved her deeply

We could not make her stay

A golden heart stopped beating

Hard working hands put to rest

God broke our hearts to prove to us

He only takes the best.

I have others, so PM me if you want to read some more! :furawatchi:

 

[Crystalized]

I love to write poetry ^^

 

[Tamagirl_Desy]

I love to write poems. They aren't depressing though. My favourite ones that I wrote is are as follows:
GOSSIP

In every coversation

I dwell every lip

I tumble out with envy

And at your heart I rip

I tear apart your friendships

And whisper in your dreams

Although I am a craving

I make you want to scream

At first I may seem harmless

Just a senseless little quip

But soon am a yearning

Into your mind I rip

Even though I'm abstract

See the damage I can do?

For my name is Gossip

And like fire I consume you

HE ONLY TAKES THE BEST

God saw she was getting tired

And cure was not to be

So He put His arms around her

And whispered, "Come with Me."

With tearfilled eyes we watched her

Suffer and fade away

Although we loved her deeply

We could not make her stay

A golden heart stopped beating

Hard working hands put to rest

God broke our hearts to prove to us

He only takes the best.

I have others, so PM me if you want to read some more!

Nice poems, but for the second one I believe you got your idea from this and just changed it up a little.

 

EDIT: Actually, the very same poem is on that page.

 

[~*Starfire*~]

[SIZE=8pt]I am a poet! I will post my poetry tomorrow[/SIZE]

 

[~»tamagirl101«~]

Nice poems, but for the second one I believe you got your idea from this and just changed it up a little. 

EDIT: Actually, the very same poem is on that page.

No, I swear I've never seen that poem before; I have morals, and I wouldn't do something like that, it's illegal and wrong.

 

[tamaw/pants]

No, I swear I've never seen that poem before; I have morals, and I wouldn't do something like that, it's illegal and wrong.

Do you know the chances of never seeing that and writing the exact same thing? It's extremely, extremely x10000 slim if not virtualy impossible.

 

[fluffums]

No, I swear I've never seen that poem before; I have morals, and I wouldn't do something like that, it's illegal and wrong.

You could not have written a poem that just 'happened' to be exactly the same as one written by another person. Seriously, it's not cool to steal other people's work just so people on the internet will tell you "You're such a good writer! You should get your work published!"

 

[tamachick1200]

Ahh... poetry... They are unique and different in thier own way. I think a poet is a well imaginative person who likes to share thier feelings in thier own way, as well as an author of course. I'd like to write a poem but I don't think I have the certian skills to write my own poem. A poet is a decent job for me and I think if I at least write a poem that is fair enough for me I'd share it with others, publish it, then make a various amount of more decent poems that are satisfying to others.

See ya peoples

TC1200

 

[~*.:Elmo:.*~]

im wierd i am a really happy person and i always look on the bright side of things but when it comes to poetry and writing im really deep and depressing

My wrist are bleeding,

and i don't know why,

but when they bleed i get this high,

it sends a shiver up my back,

but i don't feel something,

something i lack,

 

what is this feeling?

its lonlieness and pain,

it hurts my heart,

its driving me insane,

 

i look at the marks,

that i brought upon myself,

and thats when i wonder about my health,

im slowly decaying,

rotting into the ground,

soon my heart will be completly bound,

 

and pick up my brcaelets and my long sleeve shirt,

and i slowly forget about the thing that hurts,

the thing that send me to this low,

people think its all a show,

but peer presure, love, hate and school

it's what makes be this fool.

well that i made up on the stop but anyway i love to write i will post more later and if someone whats to come up with a name for that please say

 

[Gejitchi]

I love haiku. The people who can really write them well always blow me away with how much meaning they can fit in 17 syllables. I can't write them well myself, but the ones that can are really something.

 

[.::Snowy::.]

Breathe in.

Hold on.

Wait until tomorrow.

Right now.

There's no time.

To deal with your sorrow.

Today is gonna.

Fly away with you.

For the rest of the night.

For the rest of your life.

Tonight.

One cold corridor.

Can you see the path bending.

Fork in the road.

Right, Left

Which do you want more.

Just let go.

Just keep breathing.

Fly away with yourself.

One day is not gonna.

Be the same again.

It's true.

One night.

Can change you forever.

We make mistakes.

It's just what we do.

So let tonight.

Fly away with you.

There isn't a rhyming pattern in this poem so it is a little hard to read but I just made it up on the spot. =D

 

[heart of stone87]

I love it i will do some haiku poems.

I see a window

in the evil,evil,evil mansion

it is mocking me

pretty cool huh?