Poem=Bullied

[Amizura]

Bullied

I stand here today

Staring in the mirror

Knowing deep down I'm not ugly or gay

So why do they bug me,

and everybody else they see?

I'm different, yes

But why does that matter?

I'm merely shorter and fatter

I can't stand what I feel

It's getting hard to deal

I feel like everything is falling down...

Down upon my infamous crown

 

I used to be pretty

I used to be smart

I used to have everything from a group to a cart

Now I stand here

Lonesome and weak

Knowing the pain will grown stronger

Grow harder

And will keep....

GOING

 

Nobody helps me

Nobody cares

Why can't they see!?

This isn't right!

This isn't fair!

With every single move I tear

Tear....tear apart

I now have a broken heart

 

It's not stopping

And never will

The bullies hit me and laugh out loud

I am surrounded by a crowd

They all stared at me, wanting to help me

But if they did they know what they would be

A supporter who sticks up for others

But that wouldn't do

The bullies would snarl and say like thunder,

"Who is the supporter!? Is it you!?"

 

I am scarred for life

I know how it feels

When people just watch as life turns it wheels

Yet there is a lesson that I have learnt:

Bullying is the worst kind of hurt

Isn't that sad? Bullying sucks

Love, Amizura

 

[tamaw/pants]

pretty good.

i'm glad someone else care that people ARE bullied.

thank you.

 

[Tama-Love]

I have read many poems on this site and in the real world- but never have I seen one a wonderful as this. I like it a lot, because it came from a person that want's to stop the bullying in this world. Thank you and I hope that the message will get across to those that are choosing to engage in bad behavior.

//Tama-Love

 

[CuteDancingBailey]

Oh my that is beautiful. It spoke to me, it came out to me, and wrapped itself around me.

Kids my age and bullying today, it goes beyond words.

This really took me in, it's suck a beautiful poem.

Good Job.

 

[*Summer*]

Bravo!

It's fantastic... THAT will get the message out to people that bullying is not right!

It's funny how a poem can speak to people more than words just like music...

I love it!

You shall be well known here for it i'm sure

 

[.::Snowy::.]

*Claps* That's a nice poem, It's bound to get the message to people. Speaking from experiance it's horrible to be in the victim's shoes.

 

[*Summer*]

Ah, Yes take it from someone with experience...

I heard someone say that he was happy that I was leaving my old school...

Oh those people there were so mean

 

[Rock Hot Chick]

Bullied
I stand here today

Staring in the mirror

Knowing deep down I'm not ugly or gay

So why do they bug me,

and everybody else they see?

I'm different, yes

But why does that matter?

I'm merely shorter and fatter

I can't stand what I feel

It's getting hard to deal

I feel like everything is falling down...

Down upon my infamous crown

 

I used to be pretty

I used to be smart

I used to have everything from a group to a cart

Now I stand here

Lonesome and weak

Knowing the pain will grown stronger

Grow harder

And will keep....

GOING

 

Nobody helps me

Nobody cares

Why can't they see!?

This isn't right!

This isn't fair!

With every single move I tear

Tear....tear apart

I now have a broken heart

 

It's not stopping

And never will

The bullies hit me and laugh out loud

I am surrounded by a crowd

They all stared at me, wanting to help me

But if they did they know what they would be

A supporter who sticks up for others

But that wouldn't do

The bullies would snarl and say like thunder,

"Who is the supporter!? Is it you!?"

 

I am scarred for life

I know how it feels

When people just watch as life turns it wheels

Yet there is a lesson that I have learnt:

Bullying is the worst kind of hurt

Isn't that sad? Bullying sucks :mimitchi:

Love, Amizura

Ohh that is very sad. but it is a good poem and if anyone is a bully they will relize that it hurts and it is very scary.

But you have done very well! well done.

Regards

//RHC

Edit: Spellings lol

 

[miffiy]

I...I'm speechless. That was so moving, so incredible so...right. I certainly know what it feels like to be bullied and rejected. but i guess we all find our place somehow, sometime, somewhere.

I used to go to a school where it was "cool" to be dumb. I was the smartest person in the whole school, including the grades above me. I came home everyday with bruises on my body and scars on my heart. Then I moved to the school i'm in now. I still don't fit in, i don't think i ever will until i'm at a school with other people that are like me. At this school, the people who are here don't bully, but their like a pack of sheep. One person is the leader, and everyone else follows their lead. There's the occasional indepentent person like me, who stands up to unfair rules and punishment, but those people are quite rare. but i can tell you this now, it is much better not to fit in at a nice school than it is to not fit in at a school full of thugs.

 

[bratztroxg]

Oh that was brilliant! You are an AMAZING poet! How long did it take you to write and did you copy some bits at all?

 

[Amizura]

Thank you everybody for your friendly comments. ^_^ Yes, bullying is just awful.....I wish it'd stop. Maybe....just maybe....if we start out small, the kindness can spread. If we here at Tamatalk can show others right from wrong, that'll do the world some good.

Oh and bratztroxg, it took me about a half an hour. I didn't copy any parts

Love, Amizura

 

[bratztroxg]

Oh wow! You can write a poem like that in just half an hour!!!! You have got real talent, girl!

 

[mimitchis_rock13579]

Bullied
I stand here today

Staring in the mirror

Knowing deep down I'm not ugly or gay

So why do they bug me,

and everybody else they see?

I'm different, yes

But why does that matter?

I'm merely shorter and fatter

I can't stand what I feel

It's getting hard to deal

I feel like everything is falling down...

Down upon my infamous crown

 

I used to be pretty

I used to be smart

I used to have everything from a group to a cart

Now I stand here

Lonesome and weak

Knowing the pain will grown stronger

Grow harder

And will keep....

GOING

 

Nobody helps me

Nobody cares

Why can't they see!?

This isn't right!

This isn't fair!

With every single move I tear

Tear....tear apart

I now have a broken heart

 

It's not stopping

And never will

The bullies hit me and laugh out loud

I am surrounded by a crowd

They all stared at me, wanting to help me

But if they did they know what they would be

A supporter who sticks up for others

But that wouldn't do

The bullies would snarl and say like thunder,

"Who is the supporter!? Is it you!?"

 

I am scarred for life

I know how it feels

When people just watch as life turns it wheels

Yet there is a lesson that I have learnt:

Bullying is the worst kind of hurt

Isn't that sad? Bullying sucks

Love, Amizura

*sniff* I almost began to cry. Bullying sucks, indeed, and my friends and I get the worst of it since we're outcasts.

 

[CuteDancerRachel]

that is a really sad and yet beautiful poem

 

[ry2005]

that made me cry!

 

[*Summer*]

Wow Bratztroxg

You said it! That is absolutely amazing Amizura.

I am hopeless at writing poems but OK at the music thing... Poems speak to me it's almost like they're yelling at me to stop the bullying... It's great! yet sad