Perotchi Dreams - What do you think?

[Eternal Mametchi Fan]

GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! I never expected my fan fiction to appear! But it has. So tell me what you think of it... XP

It's kinda sucky and I just copied and pasted it from my computer. Maybe it didn't paste properly and got messed up... I'm too lazy to check. So tell me what you like or hate about it...

 

[kuchipatchi.is.blue55]

I like it! It's cute and well written. I'm looking forward to more fan fiction from you.

 

[RayTheTama]

I really liked it, your 'fic was really cute. It might have lacked description at some places, but still was very enjoyable to read.

 

[dazzilitchigirl]

It's so amazing! I HATE description but yours had just the right amount; enough for me to picture the stuff in the story but not so much it drones on forever. I love it, write some more!

~ Dazzmina ~

 

[Eternal Mametchi Fan]

I added a poll. Now you can vote about it. But I must ask... WHAT was so cute about it...? I think it was yukky. >.<

 

[Rainbow Dash]

It wasn't yucky. Iiiiiii LOVE IT!!!! It was really cute and awsome!

 

[dazzilitchigirl]

I added a poll. Now you can vote about it. But I must ask... WHAT was so cute about it...? I think it was yukky. >.<

It wasn't cute, but it wasn't yukky either. It just had a moral at the end (helping people matters more than being famous) and had good writing style and a nice plot. I voted it's excellent. I think an annoying spammer is going round voting rubbish for everything, they did that to both our logs and loads of fan fics...

~ Dazzmina ~

 

[Eternal Mametchi Fan]

It wasn't cute, but it wasn't yukky either. It just had a moral at the end (helping people matters more than being famous) and had good writing style and a nice plot. I voted it's excellent. I think an annoying spammer is going round voting rubbish for everything, they did that to both our logs and loads of fan fics...

~ Dazzmina ~

Someone votes that my fan fiction sucks? That makes Detective Anpan mad...

GRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!BTW the person who voted that it sucks was me.

 

[kuromametchifan123]

It doesn't suck! It was a cute, entertaining story, I liked it.

 

[kuchipatchi.is.blue55]

i read it all in one go. i love tamagotchi fan fiction, and yours fit the bill! it's nice to see that you're featuring some less well known characters like perotchi, we need to see that more! it was mature without being too mature, if you get what i'm saying. i can't wait to see your next fan fiction, EMF!