On My Own

[tamtamkitty07]

Check out my story please! I'm writing the 2nd part later, I just want some improvments and tips to keep in mind. I'm not the best at writing but I would like to get better becuase I like to!! Construtive cristisism (sp?) will be grately appreciated!!! yayaya!!

 

[Chomamechi]

Huh-huh?

 

[cutie_pop]

I love On My Own!

It's one of the best stories I've read on this site! ^_^

Your story doesn't need any improvement! It's good just the way it is. You're a very talented writer!

 

[tamtamkitty07]

Wow thanks! I like writing, I love it accually, so i practice. :furawatchi:

O ya and if anyone is wondering where the story is, click my siggy! Then go look for the other parts of it too, please, I like people reading my stuff.

 

[GotchiGirl96]

i'm serious that is the best tama story i've ever read beautifully written wonderful topic just everything about it is great I can't wait for part five to come out. you are so talented as a writer and I can't wait for your next tama story to come out it will definately be on my tamatalk to do list.

 

[kuchipatchiluver]

I really like ur story! Its awesome! I just read part 5. its so sad...

 

kuchipatchiluver

 

[GotchiGirl96]

i almost cried when i read part five ^_^ i can't wait for part six to come out

 

[Kaygotchi]

that was awesome! but sad, that could be a book. You could maybe give more detail, but other than that, WOW!!! h34r:

 

[tamtamkitty07]

that was awesome! but sad, that could be a book. You could maybe give more detail, but other than that, WOW!!!   ^_^   ^_^

More detail, can do! *does a dance*

 

[cutie_pop]

That last bit was sad.

I like Sudri's positive attitude.

 

[CuteDancingBailey]

That is very good! *claps* It's awesome! I'm going to write a story right now and everybody at school thinks I have the best imagination and write the best stories. Yours is awesome!

 

[tamtamkitty07]

He he sorry you how it says "Part 5 already? Well duh!" The 5 is supposed to be a 6..... LOLZ

Just so you all know hehehe

 

[Star Tama]

WOW !!!!!! I love your story i've read all 6 parts and you could be a proffesional writer!!!! I'd like it if peopel went to see mine to!!!! It's called rescue. Just look it up in the search engine and u should find parts 1 & 2. Part 3 is still being checked for bad content like they always do.

 

[ZOOMrocks]

Wow. That is by far the best story I have read on Tamatalk. Yes, a tiny bit more detail, and it'll be perfect!

 

[GotchiGirl96]

sorry to be impatient but WHEN IS PART SEVEN GONNA COME OUT????? I have been waiting a couple of days now i am very anxious can you give us a date to when part seven is going to be out and one more question how many parts are there going to be this way i won't have to go to fan fiction everyday saying is there another part of on my own coming out thanks

 

[tamtamkitty07]

Well I did part 7 last night, I guess the guides have to look at it or something I dunno, hopefully it will be there soon.

Theres going to be 1 or 2 more parts ^__^

 

[GotchiGirl96]

Well I did part 7 last night, I guess the guides have to look at it or something I dunno, hopefully it will be there soon.
Theres going to be 1 or 2 more parts ^__^

thanks i just read part seven that was a very happy part i can't wait for the next part or 2 to be out

 

[ZOOMrocks]

I love Part 7!! Can't wait for part 8...

 

[tamtamkitty07]

Part 8 is coming out soon cuz last night the phone lines were messed up so no internet.

Wow I have fans lol

 

[dog11]

Good jod*claps loud*