Meet zoe

[Crowfrost]

she is a spy and a popular girl, but she doesn't want to be a spy

here it is

Chapter one.

A regular girl.

“Zoe, are you sure you can’t come to the sleepover?” asked Zoe’s friend Lilly for the three hundredth time today,” Lilly, I told you already my parents are out of town that day and my aunt Serena is coming over to watch me.” Replied Zoe before taking a huge bite out of her Blalonga and cheese sandwich. “Oh, ok.” Replied her crestfallen friend sadly as she sucked on her apple juice box making a sound like a cat that had just been stepped on, “Um, Zoe?” said her friend Wendy “Not now.” Said Zoe “But Zoe.” Replied Lilly pointing behind Zoe “What?” asked Zoe turning around as Dwayne lonster walked up, Zoe had had a crush on him since 1st grade and still did after all he was popular, cute and smart, what more could a girl want? “Why didn’t you tell me?” demanded Zoe whipping around to look at the cowering Lilly and Wendy then at her best friend Taylor who just looked back evenly with his blue eyes glimmering amusingly, “Taylor, what did you do?” zoe asked looking at Lilly, his sister accusingly. Lilly grinned “Um, Zoe?” she said as Zoe looked on sadly wondering if her parents were alive at this very minute.

 

[tamagirl_123]

Great story!~

 

[Crowfrost]

Thanks!It is great fun writing them, I like to write in my spare time, the bad thing is both of them are one seperate computers and I want to post them here so if i have a crash I still hev them yah, no?

 

[kandi kween]

OMG i love the detail!!!! it is going real good!! wats gonna happen???? Are her parents dead? Do her friends figure out that she is a spy and go out and try to help her???? Tell me, but right now i am going to eat. bbs (be back soon)XD

~Kandi, Highly anticipating

P.S if this gets me this excited, u did a good job of keeping me on my toes :]

 

[Tama*Lover]

It is a great story! Very well written

 

[Crowfrost]

LOLZ, I haven't relly planned to much but i can tell you taylor likes Zoe, alot...Does that get you wondering?Ahh, If it does I will make the next part soon!

 

[Crowfrost]

Here is the wohle first chapter!

I have all the stuff in it.

Chapter one.

A regular girl.

“Zoe, are you sure you can’t come to the sleepover?” asked Zoe’s friend Lilly for the three hundredth time today,” Lilly, I told you already my parents are out of town that day and my aunt Serena is coming over to watch me.” Replied Zoe before taking a huge bite out of her Blalonga and cheese sandwich. “Oh, ok.” Replied her crestfallen friend sadly as she sucked on her apple juice box making a sound like a cat that had just been stepped on, “Um, Zoe?” said her friend Wendy “Not now.” Said Zoe “But Zoe.” Replied Lilly pointing behind Zoe “What?” asked Zoe turning around as Dwayne lonster walked up, Zoe had had a crush on him since 1st grade and still did after all he was popular, cute and smart, what more could a girl want? “Why didn’t you tell me?” demanded Zoe whipping around to look at the cowering Lilly and Wendy then at her best friend Taylor who just looked back evenly with his blue eyes glimmering amusingly, “Taylor, what did you do?” zoe asked looking at Lilly, his sister accusingly. Lilly grinned “Um, Zoe?” she said as Zoe looked on sadly wondering if her parents were alive at this very minute. “Yeah?” asked Zoe snapping back into reality as Taylor smiled sweetly, that kindergarten ‘I like you’ type of smile but Zoe was too caught up in what Lilly was saying she didn’t notice But she did notice as Taylor kicked Lilly under the table because Lilly groaned at the force, Getting up Zoe smiled and pet her cat Kitten-cola who had been seated at the next chair over the whole time, Zoe picked up her tray that contained her barley eaten lunch of not toughed tuna sandwich, 4 bread crusts and an empty coca cola bottle she popped a piece of Lilly’s gum that had been laying on the table in her mouth as she walked away with Wendy right behind her Zoe snuck a few pretzels from some kids tray as he walked by so she could eat when she got a chocolate craving which normally occurred during math class while Mrs.Higgenbother was doing her speech about long division which she passed at 3rd grade level.

Chapter 2....

 

[kandi kween]

I like the whole of the chapter 1 but i think u should have taylors crush become more secretive, and zoe doesnt really notice untill one part gives it away. =/ It seems like u were rushing

 

[Crowfrost]

Yeah, I still have some editing, he will end up liking another sports loving girl and zoe gets jelous and gets kicked off the Cheer team because she missed a practice because she was trying to find taylor to tell him that she loved him, I don't know that is a rough draft so far...

 

[ta9394]

this goes in a diffrent place, but very well written!