Mametchi's Pursuit

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Okay, the rules are:

*NO SWEARING/GORE/EXTREME VIOLENCE/ETC.

 

*KEEP YOUR SENSES (DON'T GO OFF-TRACK)

 

*MAKE A GOOD CONTRIBUTION TO THE STORY (EDIT: It's alright if your post isn't that long. It lengthens the story. :D )

 

*USE GOOD GRAMMAR/SPELLING/ETC. (NO CHATSPEAK OR SUCH)

 

*THIS STORY TAKES PLACE IN THE TAMA-ANIME UNIVERSE

 

*I WILL POST TOO, TO TRY TO KEEP A FAIRLY LINEAR STRUCTURE

 

*HAVE FUN! OR EEELLLSSEEE... :)

Let me start:

One day at the Tamagotchi School, Memetchi and Kuchipatchi are getting to Homeroom. Memetchi wonders, "I haven't seen Mametchi at all this morning!" Yeah," replied Kuchipatchi, "I hope he's not late, tchi!" "He probably wanted to get a head start on today's assignment or something," said Memetchi. To their surprise, however, Mametchi was sitting with a picture of Tampopo on his desk. "Ah, Tampopo... If only you knew how much I'm starting to like you," he said to himself. "Don't worry, though. I'll find a way to meet up with you again!" Memetchi remarked, "Is that what I think it is? Mametchi...in LOVE?...With TAMPOPO?" Kuchipatchi replied, "I think so, tchi!" "Hold on, I'll get a closer look..." Then Memetchi snuck into the classroom. Miss Perfect was setting her things down on the Teacher's Desk, unaware of what is going on. What looked like the drawings for an invention lied on Mametchi's backpack. "I hope nobody finds out, though," Mametchi said worriedly. "I may end up in a lot of trouble." When Memetchi came back out, she whispered to Kuchipatchi, "Kuchipatchi! I think he's gonna make an invention; it MUST have something to do with this whole 'love' business!" "I didn't know Mametchi ran a business, tchi!," Kuchi whispered back. "NOOO!" Memetchi then gave a facepalm and groaned. Flowertchi was passing by and said angrily to Memetchi, "You know, it's none of your business what Mametchi is doing!" "Probably doing this 'cause she's in love with him," Flowertchi remarked to herself. "HEY! I'M NOT IN LOVE! I'M JUST CONCERNED FOR MY FRIEND, THAT'S ALL!," Memetchi yelled. "WHAA, CLASS IS GONNA START, TCHI!," Kuchipatchi shouted to the two girls. Memetchi replied, "You're right! We gotta go!" The three then went in the room just before the bell rang.

-TO BE CONTINUED-

EDIT: I may also make a Fan-Fiction version of this story by myself later on.

 
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As class started, Mametchi was still acting very pecular.... He speeded through all of his work and quickly stated searching in his backpack. Memetchi whispered to Kuchipatchi "I think he is getting the plans for the invention out!".

 
Miss Perfect, however, quickly noticed Mametchi's searching, and asked, "Don't you think you should be getting back to your seat?" Mametchi replied, "Sure, but I...I...FORGOT MY HOMEWORK!" Miss Perfect said, "No, you didn't. I have it right up here. What exactly are you getting, though?" Mametchi, once he found the notebook containing his feelings and drawings, went up and showed it to Miss Perfect. "OOOOOH!," Miss Perfect remarked, "LOOKS LIKE SOMEONE'S IN LOOOOVE!!!" Once she began reading the notes, Mametchi politely asked, "Umm, could I have those back?" "Oh, alright. But get back to your seat! We need to catch up on our studies!" It was too late, though, as everyone heard enough to give their opinions on the matter. While many of them just laughed, Makiko had a nerve to pick with Mametchi about what she heard...

 
Everyone besides kutchipatchi and memetchi was wondering who he liked.

Makiko started braging.

"It's probaly me,with my perfect curls and looks! exlaimed makkiko.

"well it's definitely NOT tampopo or ringotchi, no offence guys." said kuromametchi.

"none taken"tampopo and ringotchi chorused.

brrrrrrrrrrring!

"okay children,end of school.Time to go home!"Miss perfect said.

"lets follow mametchi home-tchi!"

"ok...we can see what he is up to!" said memetchi"

as they walked home,memetchi started mumbling and writing in his note book.

"can you see what he's writing?" whispered memetchi.

"no-tchi!"

"oh well."

Just at that moment,mametchi turned around.Memetchi and kutchipatchi hid in the bushes.it started sprinkling.

"oh well."said memetchi."we can spy on him tomorrow."

so they both worked home,little knowing what mametchi was planning.

 
*That night, in Mametchi's room*

Mametchi: *says with a slightly sleepy tone* I think I've finished the specifications! Now to actually build the device! My room isn't big enough to build, though, and I can't wake up my family...Maybe I'll move to the basement! I'm sure Dad [Papamametchi] wouldn't notice!

*A couple hours later, in the basement*

*Mametchi is shown with safety gear while drilling in the last screws to his device*

Mametchi: *whispers* Alright! Now for the final touch! *Reaches for metallic box-shaped object* This AI unit will give the Tama Transformationizer M1 a life of its own! *puts AI unit in the top of device*

*The device comes to life*

Tama Transformationizer M1: *shouting* Hey, Mametchi! Am I finished yet?

*Mametchi shhs*

Mametchi: *whispers* Be quiet! You'll wake everyone else up! Well, looks like you'll need some more work...

TTM1: Aww... *dissapointed look*

*Later, Mametchi works out the bugs in the TTM1*

Mametchi: *talks quietly to self* I just hope Tampopo dosen't think I'm silly when I travel down to Earth... *moans*

TTM1: What d'ya say?

Mametchi: *talks to self* This is gonna be a long night... *continues working*

TO BE CONTINUED

 
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(Sorry for double-posting, but I figure the best way to make this story chug along is to continue it so that it will go to the top of the board, so that more people will notice it)

*Kuchi walks quietly through the front door of Mame's house, towards the basement*

 

Kuchi: *calling out to Mametchi, though quietly* Mametchi? Um, Mametchi? *scratches head in confusion* Hmmm...Where's Mametchi? HUH? *notices quiet sounds coming from basement* Looks like Mametchi might be down there-tchi! *tiptoes down basement steps* Mametchi? May I have some snacks-tchi....Wha! *Kuchi sees Mametchi working on the TTM1*

 

Mame: *talking to self* All...most...done... What the?!? *hears the stair-steps creaking* Kuchipatchi?!?

 

Kuchi: *shouting* Mametchi, may I have a snack!?!?

 

Mame: Wha...what are you doing here? Can't you see I'm doing something private? And be quieter, for heaven's sake!

 

Kuchi: *shouting (even louder)* It looks like you're working on...

 

Mame: *slaps Kuchi in face* *whispers* Be quiet! :furawatchi:

 

Kuchi: But I just want a...

 

Mame: Fine, you can stay, but don't touch a thing! Can I trust you to keep a secret?

 

Kuchi: Yah-tchi! ;)

 

*Mame tells Kuchi about how he ended up building the TTM1*

(Others may elaborate on what Mame said next)

 

EDIT: Changed a word and changed the layout of things a bit

 
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Kuchipatchi, had a secret, and it wasn't really HIS secret, during class, after Miss Perfect read the letters out, he realized Flowertchi had ran out crying. He smelt food, so he went to search her desk and he found a heart shaped cookie in it with Mametchi on it. He couldn't believe it, but some of the other stuff he found as OLDER, looking like how she wrote back when she was a Sakurmotchi. He couldn't believe it, and it looked like Flowertchi really LOVED Mametchi more than anything. If Mametchi went on liking Tampopo, Flowertchi could go CRaZy! But at that very moment, Flowertchi was on her bed at home crying while cuddling Mamavioletchi...

To be continued..

 
*Flowertchi is crying on her bed with Mamaflowertchi nearby*

 

Mamaflowertchi: What's wrong, my dear?

 

Flowertchi: *sniff-sniff* I don't think Mametchi likes me!

 

Mama: Why do you think that?

 

Flower: Well, this morning, Ms. Perfect read some notes that Mametchi wrote, and she commented on them being some sort-of love letter. And when I was heading out of the classroom to lunch, I saw from the corner of my eye that they seemed to be about Tampopo!

 

Mama: Honey, it's not any of your business what Mametchi writes.

 

Flower: I know, I'm sorry I did that. It was an accident, I swear! *sniff*

 

Mama: I forgive you. And I'm sure someday, you'll find the perfect husband! I know I have! *winks at Papakizatchi (?), who is outside the door*

 

Flower: Thank you...I'm still a bit sad about it, though. :(

 

Mama: Yeah, these things take time to get used to. Well, goodnight, dear...*kisses Flowertchi on cheek*

 

Flower: Good night...

 

*Mamaflowertchi leaves Violetchi's room*

 

*Meanwhile, back in Papamametchi's workshop (The basement)*

 

Mame: Well, I going to get ready for my travels, Kuchipatchi.

 

Kuchi: I want to go-tchi!

 

Mame: Please don't Kuchipatchi! I'm sorry, but I can't risk anything on this trip!

 

Kuchi: Hmmph! You won't take your best friend with you, huh-tchi!

 

Mame: I promise you can go the next time I visit the Blue Planet! Now anyway, I'm going in the middle of the night because of the different positions of each area of each planet, and I don't want anyone to find out I'm missing, so......(blahblahblahblah*)....

 

Kuchi: *thinks about eating*....Oh, well, okay-tchi! *yawns loudly; Mame shhs Kuch again* I gotta get back to bed-tchi! Nighty-night-tchi! *walks up steps*

 

Mame: See you later! *thinking to self* I hope this works out well... :D *Looks at TTM1*

*The "blahblahblahblah" was when Kuchipatchi was tuning-out Mametchi's soon-to-be drawn-out lecture

 
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