Giant Melodytchi Comments

[Eternal Mametchi Fan]

I posted part one, it should be approved soon. I might not post part two until after the world ends, but hopefully I'll finish it soon. Tell me what you think!

 

[dazzilitchigirl]

I liked it the way it was before, the one you sent me by email. The new one is good but not as dramatic and random as the other. But that's just my opinion. What I can say for sure is, it's well written and doesn't have any mistakes that I've noticed.

 

[Eternal Mametchi Fan]

I liked it the way it was before, the one you sent me by email. The new one is good but not as dramatic and random as the other. But that's just my opinion. What I can say for sure is, it's well written and doesn't have any mistakes that I've noticed.

It's not meant to be ran-dom! But, you are right, it is not very dramatic, so I shall make more interesting stuff happen in the next part. Too bad, Melodytchi won't destroy the world. I'll make her capture Kurosantchi and the others.

And just for you, I am writing a different, REALLY random story you'll love!