Detective Anpan

[Eternal Mametchi Fan]

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I did not write this story, but it is the best story I have ever seen! I want to thank the wonderful person who wrote it. Did you enjoy it as much as I did?

 

[dazzilitchigirl]

It was well written but I don't understand why you found it funny. I think it was meant to be sad.

 

[jujiesings]

It gets better! I'm including EMF's character Pero! (I am not ripping her off btw)

 

[Eternal Mametchi Fan]

I read part two! It was so cool. You should make each part longer though.

 

[The Ultimate Doomer]

It's getting more mysterious.

 

[jujiesings]

Is that good or bad, the ultimate doomer?

 

[Eternal Mametchi Fan]

I'm loving it more and more! I wonder who the REAL murderer is.

 

[jujiesings]

Thanks, EMF, that means a lot to me! <3

 

[Eternal Mametchi Fan]

OMG I read the last part! I loved it! It was the best story I have ever seen. Thank you so much for writing it!

 

[The Ultimate Doomer]

The last part was pretty good and humorous, like whe--GAH they make out at the end WHY!? D:

 

[jujiesings]

Ultimate Doomer: I find it funny that you hate kissing.

EMF: Thanks! You were my inspiration!