Crissy and Friends Ch.1 Gotta get Hitched

[tamagirl1092]

It was my first story, but be honest. If you didn't like it, go ahead and say so. For the one's who didn't like that much, could you tell me why you didn't like it so I know what to work on.

I love to write storys. So do yall want to see what happens next? If so I'll write Ch.2.

Remember, be honest.

 

[tamabebe12]

I like it alot. Do keep going. The suspense is killing me!! ^_^ It was really good. When you said that Crissy could only see Crystal in dots, I thought something bad was going to happen!!

 

[tamagirl1092]

Thanks. I meant that by when they evolve, the screen goes in dots, then it goes blank for a sec.

*I already wrote chapter 2! I just have to put it in tamagotchi fiction! I hope you like it!*