Chamametchi's Babysitter...

Eternal Mametchi Fan · Feb 14, 2012

I just started this story but please say what you think!

kuromametchibeast · Feb 15, 2012

Why... WHY! KUROMAMETCHI DOES NOT SMOKE OR DRINK! YOU MONSTER!

kuchipatchi.is.blue55 · Feb 15, 2012

i think your story should continue, but please don't make it too dark or have kuromametchi and chamametchi smoking/drinking alcohol/doing drugs, as it's not exactly positive. i suggest you tone it down a little bit. keep writing!

The Ultimate Doomer · Feb 16, 2012

kuromametchibeast said:
Why... WHY! KUROMAMETCHI DOES NOT SMOKE OR DRINK! YOU MONSTER!

Woah, Mametchi Fan, no need to give Kuromametchi a bad name! I actually enjoyed the story, but I do agree that it shouldn't mention drugs and alcohol.

Kurobeast is right, why would Kuro smoke or drink?

Eternal Mametchi Fan · Feb 17, 2012

kuromametchibeast said:
Why... WHY! KUROMAMETCHI DOES NOT SMOKE OR DRINK! YOU MONSTER!

He does too drink. Haven't you seen episode 16 of the anime show???

Ugh...can't think of an ending!

kuromametchibeast · Feb 17, 2012

1. I have an ending and

2. Ive tried to watch episode 16 but everytime i try something its "deleted due to copyright claim"

The ending is when they go into the bad cafe. Kuromametchi orders them drinks (beer for chamametchi, and whisky for hapitchi even though i cant spell her name) but then mametchi comes home. He wonders where they all could have gone, when he see's a note saying they've gone to the bad cafe. He panics and rushes over there. Meanwhile, they done like the drinks, but kuromametchi helps them love it. Then mametchi rushes in and stop them from drinking anymore. I cant think of anything else though.