Battle of MY song 2!

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Tamagirl_Desy

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Alright!

Some of you may have seen my first topic, but this is the finale. :mametchi:

Whichever song wins I'm singing it in my talent show. REMEMBER, I wrote these songs so please don't steal them.

So vote for which one you like best!

Out of Mind, Out of Sight

I was walkin passed your house late at night

Wasn't sure if knockin was really alright

I was gettin kinda chilly so I pulled up my sleeves

Still wondering why you actually had to leave

Cause I...

Could have been your lover

Could have been your girl too

Now I don't know what to do

All I can think about is how I lost you

Cause everything it felt just right

Out of mind, out of sight

I'm sitting in the same spot where we first gazed into eachother's eyes

You don't know how hard it was to say goodbye

I spent three hours crying alone that night

Out of mind, out of sight

Wasn't sure what I was doing

Didn't know who I was fooling

Cause I...

Could have been your lover

Could have been your girl too

Now I don't know what to do

All I can think about is how I lost you

Cause everything it felt just right

Out of mind, out of sight

Give me a little bit of time

In sad chorus we chime

My empty heart is missing you

Oh yeah, it's true

Can't you see my hopeless dreams?

My sanity is ripping at the seams

Oh oh oh oh

I-I-I-I-I am out of mind, out of sight

I-I-I-I-I'm not gonna lose this fight

It's time to turn the lights out

It's time to close my eyes

But with each lasting moment

My broken heart shall die

Cause I...

Could have been your lover

Could have been your girl too

Now I don't know what to do

All I can think about is how I lost you

Cause everything it felt just right

Out of mind, out of sight

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That Song

I keep listening to that song

It's stuck inside my head

It speaks words that were never said

I press ''play'' for the millionth time

I want you to be mine

Tears fill up in my eyes

Nothing can hold back my cry

If I told you that I didn't love you

That would be a lie

I keep listening to that song

I cant stop no matter what I do

Why?

Its the song that reminds me of you

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Dreams of a Broken Heart

It was way passed midnight when you called me on my telephone

You asked what I was doin and I didn't tell you I was all alone

And I knew that deep down you might of cared

For I thought it meant love with all the times we shared

Late at night, dreams holding on so tight

Listening to your faithful voice, it just felt so right

Baby if you just wait for me

I can take you there

In my soul you tear

I never really thought it would come to this

For I still remember our first kiss

Did you know how to killed me for us to be torn apart?

But I guess you cant see

The dreams of a broken heart

Do you recall that day when you said the words ''I Love You''?

Or that night we spent alone?

Now you got me sittin here on my own

Not having anyone to talk to or hold on tight

Cause you walked away out of sight

Baby if you just wait for me

I can take you there

In my soul you tear

I never really thought it would come to this

For I still remember our first kiss

Did you know how to killed me for us to be torn apart?

But I guess you cant see

The dreams of a broken heart

Time won't pass me by

Into your arms I cry

Didn't you see my sign?

I'm still that little girl who fell to pieces

Searing pain my heart realeases

Baby if you just wait for me

I can take you there

In my soul you tear

I never really thought it would come to this

For I still remember our first kiss

Did

you know how to killed me for us to be torn apart?

But I guess you cant see

The dreams of a broken heart

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Happy voting ^^

 
Hehe, I'm first to reply!

Out of Mind, Out of Sight I voted because it's a great songs, the lyrics are good. But I like That Song :mametchi:

Best Wishes,

[[.x..barky..x.]]

 
They're all so beautiful! Now I think I like your new one best, Dreams of a Broken Heart. :mametchi:

 
They're all great. I had to vote for Out of Mind, Out of Sight, though. You're a great song writer. ^^ I just wish I could hear the tune and the beat to them.

I'd say it depends on which you're most comfortable singing in the talent show in front of everybody. ;] Best of luck at the show.

 
I'd have to say Out Of Mind, Out Of Sight, has my vote. But they're all awesome!^^

 

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