Eternal Mametchi Fan Well-known member Joined Jan 22, 2012 Messages 7,691 Reaction score 3,168 Location In an egg Jan 28, 2012 #1 Hi everyone, I just wanted to know what you thought of my story so far. I will continue it soon, so please give me your feedback and suggestions.
Hi everyone, I just wanted to know what you thought of my story so far. I will continue it soon, so please give me your feedback and suggestions.
The Ultimate Doomer Well-known member Joined Jan 28, 2012 Messages 718 Reaction score 308 Location somewhere Jan 29, 2012 #2 The story is okay and humorous, but I would prefer a Tama story with a more positive theme (instead of war over Tama-Love).
The story is okay and humorous, but I would prefer a Tama story with a more positive theme (instead of war over Tama-Love).
The Ultimate Doomer Well-known member Joined Jan 28, 2012 Messages 718 Reaction score 308 Location somewhere Jan 29, 2012 #3 Read the second part. Still pretty funny but it's getting a little too violent.
Eternal Mametchi Fan Well-known member Joined Jan 22, 2012 Messages 7,691 Reaction score 3,168 Location In an egg Jan 31, 2012 #4 The third part is finished! You'll be SHOCKED! It's romantic and funny, but not that violent.
The Ultimate Doomer Well-known member Joined Jan 28, 2012 Messages 718 Reaction score 308 Location somewhere Feb 2, 2012 #5 The last part was pretty shocking, but it's good to see that it remained lighthearted. Last edited by a moderator: Feb 2, 2012
Eternal Mametchi Fan Well-known member Joined Jan 22, 2012 Messages 7,691 Reaction score 3,168 Location In an egg Feb 2, 2012 #6 "Shocking" is an understatement! Teehee! Uhh...are you the only one who read my story? Booooo...nobody likes my stuff.
"Shocking" is an understatement! Teehee! Uhh...are you the only one who read my story? Booooo...nobody likes my stuff.
Orandatchi Well-known member Joined Jun 15, 2011 Messages 1,359 Reaction score 137 Location Why do you want to stalk me Feb 2, 2012 #7 I read it!!
kuchipatchi.is.blue55 Well-known member Joined Nov 24, 2011 Messages 1,543 Reaction score 318 Feb 3, 2012 #8 i read it! i agree with The Ultimate Doomer, the first two parts were kind of heavy and a bit violent. it was good to see how it turned out in the end! keep writing!
i read it! i agree with The Ultimate Doomer, the first two parts were kind of heavy and a bit violent. it was good to see how it turned out in the end! keep writing!