a story to be named later

[repeat_offender]

i wrote a whole (non tama) story, and the title is Family Landmines. but child abuse and tamas don't really mix...so i thought, if i wrote the begining of the story, someone else will take it in a different direction...? maybe..?

Kyle got dressed and went downstairs for breakfast. His mom was watching tv, and his dad was at work. He walked into the kitchen, to see his 9 yr old brother, Mike, digging in the cereal box for the prize. "Why do you have to put your dirty hands in my breakfast?" Mike rolled his eyes. Kyle decided to skip breakfast, and went to the bathroom. He runs his fingers through his hair, trying to fix his red curly bedhead, and grabs his bag. He was inches from the door when his mother stops him. "Is that any way to dress? Pull up those pants! They'll be around your ancle's by the time you get to school!" He ignored the comment that she makes every morning, and left.

Kyle's best friend, Brian, caught up with him half way to school. "Hey, man. What's up?" "Brain, dude, just one more week. One more week. I got my permit, now I'll get the car. This is gonna be the best birthday EVER." "Yeah, man. 16th birthday's are really sweet. Now we don't have to take the bus everywhere." They walked the rest of the way in scilence; which is unusual because normally you couldn't shut them up if you put a gun to there head.

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i didn't write about their school day, but someone else can. there were originally 3 more characters introduced by now, but if i introduced those characters it would go in the same direction as it was written before, and rite after what i wrote is where the child abuse part starts. so, can someone else take it to a more...happy place?

 

[Tamagirl_Desy]

i wrote a whole (non tama) story, and the title is Family Landmines. but child abuse and tamas don't really mix...so i thought, if i wrote the begining of the story, someone else will take it in a different direction...? maybe..?
Kyle got dressed and went downstairs for breakfast. His mom was watching tv, and his dad was at work. He walked into the kitchen, to see his 9 yr old brother, Mike, digging in the cereal box for the prize. "Why do you have to put your dirty hands in my breakfast?" Mike rolled his eyes. Kyle decided to skip breakfast, and went to the bathroom. He runs his fingers through his hair, trying to fix his red curly bedhead, and grabs his bag. He was inches from the door when his mother stops him. "Is that any way to dress? Pull up those pants! They'll be around your ancle's by the time you get to school!" He ignored the comment that she makes every morning, and left.

Kyle's best friend, Brian, caught up with him half way to school. "Hey, man. What's up?" "Brain, dude, just one more week. One more week. I got my permit, now I'll get the car. This is gonna be the best birthday EVER." "Yeah, man. 16th birthday's are really sweet. Now we don't have to take the bus everywhere." They walked the rest of the way in scilence; which is unusual because normally you couldn't shut them up if you put a gun to there head.

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i didn't write about their school day, but someone else can. there were originally 3 more characters introduced by now, but if i introduced those characters it would go in the same direction as it was written before, and rite after what i wrote is where the child abuse part starts. so, can someone else take it to a more...happy place?

Kyle and Brian arrived at school. The day went smoothly on, until, that is, until it was time to go home. Just as Kyle and Brian were starting to walk across the school lot, Kyle felt a hand of his shoulder. He turned around. Horror filled his expression. With a grin, Tony Maglum folded his strong arms. He had dark brown hair and deep brown eyes, and he was the biggest bully around. "So, I hear, your birthday is in one week." he said coldly. His grin got larger. "Um...yeah." Kyle said, trying not to show how scared he was. Tony glanced back at his gang of friends (who were also bullies) then back at Kyle. "Well, here's an early birthday present!" He punched Kyle in the nose! Kyle held his nose and it stung with pain. But a small smile formed as Mr. Tomlin (one of the teachers) came running over to Tony. "You...you are suspended Mr. Maglum!" he said, anger filling his eyes. Tony actually seemed glad, so instantly Kyle's smile vanished. He got up, wiped his nose, and said softly, "Let's go Brian." So they left the school grounds, and de-parted a few minutes later. Kyle headed home. He opened the door to find Mike playing his gameboy! "I don't want your dirty little hands on my stuff, ya hear?" he said roughly. "Awwww come on big bro!" Mike pleaded. "I was just about to beat that big bad guy you could never beat!" But Kyle just shook his head and walked into his room...

 

[repeat_offender]

Kyle and Brian arrived at school. The day went smoothly on, until, that is, until it was time to go home. Just as Kyle and Brian were starting to walk across the school lot, Kyle felt a hand of his shoulder. He turned around. Horror filled his expression. With a grin, Tony Maglum folded his strong arms. He had dark brown hair and deep brown eyes, and he was the biggest bully around. "So, I hear, your birthday is in one week." he said coldly. His grin got larger. "Um...yeah." Kyle said, trying not to show how scared he was. Tony glanced back at his gang of friends (who were also bullies) then back at Kyle. "Well, here's an early birthday present!" He punched Kyle in the nose! Kyle held his nose and it stung with pain. But a small smile formed as Mr. Tomlin (one of the teachers) came running over to Tony. "You...you are suspended Mr. Maglum!" he said, anger filling his eyes. Tony actually seemed glad, so instantly Kyle's smile vanished. He got up, wiped his nose, and said softly, "Let's go Brian." So they left the school grounds, and de-parted a few minutes later. Kyle headed home. He opened the door to find Mike playing his gameboy! "I don't want your dirty little hands on my stuff, ya hear?" he said roughly. "Awwww come on big bro!" Mike pleaded. "I was just about to beat that big bad guy you could never beat!" But Kyle just shook his head and walked into his room...

"C'mon, dude. You don't have to get so upset. Once you get that car, you can run over him!" "..yeah" Kyle said softly. His pride was hurt. "Hey, man let's go over to Shawn's." Shawn was one of their best friends. They walked over there, wishing every step they walked that they were riding in a car. When they opened Shawn's door, they stoped immedeitly. "Wha-What happend in here..." Brian said astonished. "I think the better question is...what didn't happen in here.." Kyle corrected. "Oh, sorry. I haven't had the will to clean up around here for a while..." "How long, the last millenium?" Brian said. "It's not that dirty." "Didn't your carpet used to be green?" Kyle asked. "I think it's- I think it's purple now..." Brian said squinting his eyes at the carpet. "Yeah well at least you can see it. Wanna watch some tv?" "Sure." Kyle said sitting on what looked like bed but he wasn't so sure." Brian looked around. "Shawn, your tv doesn't have by any chance this thing people used in the good old days called a 'dial' does it?" "No..." "Ok, well in order to watch tv...we'll need a remote..." "Yeah..I kinda lost that...like 4 minutes before you guys walked in." "Sure."

They started looking. They looked for hours until Kyle finally found it inside an old cereal box under Shawns bed. The prize. "I guess that's what Mike was doing. He was training. For a day like this. Right on little brother, right on." "Ok, turn it on already!" Kyle pressed the button but nothing happend. "What..? DUDE THERE'S NO BATTERIES!!!!!!!" "Oh...I must have...lost those too..?" Kyle started laughing. Brian was glad he was because he forgot about what happend earlier that day. He thought he would never get over it.