A Lonely Life

[GotchiGirl96]

I just finished making the second part, but I want to know what I could do to make it better from reading the first part. Also, if you liked please tell me that by adding a reply in this topic. THANKIES!!!

GotchiGirl96

 

[GotchiGirl96]

I knew nobody would like my story. Why did I even bother writing it?

 

[ino yamanaka]

well....u no i loved it but im having a bad day too ....anywoo i love ur story to me...it sounds real!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :kusatchi:

 

[GotchiGirl96]

well....u no i loved it but im having a bad day too ....anywoo i love ur story to me...it sounds real!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :kusatchi:

Thanks. I really appreciate the comment. I stopped writing it because nobody was reading it. But now I think I am going to write the third part. Thanks again!!!!

 

[ino yamanaka]

yes finally i get to read part 3!!! yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

 

[GotchiGirl96]

I'll do part three tomorrow so you will probably get to read it the day after tomorrow.

 

[GotchiGirl96]

Part 3 is now approved for Fan Fiction!!!!

 

[GotchiGirl96]

Part 4 is now approved for fan fiction!!!!

 

[ino yamanaka]

so is part 5!!!!!! :kuribotchi:

 

[GotchiGirl96]

Part 6 is now approved for fan fiction!!! Hope everyone enjoys my story! I was inspired to write my story by tamtamkitty07 after reading her story ON MY OWN. Anyone who hasn't read it yet should. It is an excellent story! You need to go back about 8 pages to get to the first part. Anyways, I hope my story doesn't sound too much like hers. I was trying to make it my own story. I really hope I didn't copy because if I did I would feel very bad. I really loved tamtamkitty07's story and I decided to admire it by making my own story that was just a LITTLE bit like hers. I hope she isn't mad.

 

[ino yamanaka]

yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! part 7 the mom is gone wats next?????????!!!!!!!!!

 

[bazla1234]

stroy rocks!!!!

i was reading it yesterday in school on the coms we had free choice

 

[ino yamanaka]

COME ON! i have been waiting for a month for part 8! i want to no wat will happen to the baby!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

[ino yamanaka]

I spoke to the writer she is making part 8 fffiiinnnaaalllllyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

[tamtamkitty07]

Hey, thanks for the compliment, hehe, im flattered♥

Anyway I liked the story, I read chapter 8 a few minutes, and I love how it's told by like a grandmother's point of view. I just thought that chapter was a little sped up, but then again she was telling the story so scratch that, LoL

Kepp up the good work, it's pretty awesome, and don't worry, you didn't copy anything from my story, if you really did, it would be copied like word for word.

I hope to see more stories and stuff from you! Yayaya!

I just wrote the begginning of a story a minute ago, it's not that good, LoL

Talk to you people later, my home frys lol

 

[ino yamanaka]

Hey Tamtamkitty07, what page does your story ''On My Own'' on?