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Did you like my story? If yopu guys like it, tell me. If no body comments I think nobody likes it but doesn't want to tell me, so please vote in the poll and tell me here if I should countinue it. Please and thankyou!

 
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Thanks everyone for the comments! Since everyone gave me positive comments/votes I can safely assume you all liked it. I'm working on chapter 2 now, and I'll have it up shortly!

 
Awesomness. I got a bit confused though, you didn't indecate who was speaking at some parts. But other than that, it was really good! Tubular plot line xD
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Thanks! I'm sorry for your confused-ness, I'll try to fix that while I'm writing chapter 2!

 

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